Tutn deb gets bad since his mom didn't make him ravolis

The Beginning
After The Darkfalls Massacre got marked for deletion, the author posted this comment "Listen, creepypasta wiki, i worked hard on this, don't delete it!"

After this story was deleted the author put this message on my talk page:

"Hi, im the writer of "The darkfalls massacre" give me a solid good reason to delete this story, i put alot of things in this story that are meanfull and you going off to delete it is a poor choice,"

"YOU DELETED MY STORY!?"

"WHY!!!!! My story has a lot of emtion in it and everything, give me a soldi reason why it was deleted, u deleting it was a poor choice"

They also deleted one of my messages before it.

Then he added this to EmpyrealInvective's talk page: "U DELETED MY DARKFALLS MASSACRE STORY, WHY DELETE IT!"

He then tried to reupload it, only to be issued with a warning not to do so again.

He then vandalized the admin's user page by replacing it with "IIM STUPID!"

The author of this work deleted the above section and replaced it with this:

"The author was frustrated because he wasn't respected for his hard work, he wishes critic's would tell him good things about his work, he felt people didn't understand the message, the message was "Never give up if a alcoholic and we all have depressing moments", the author Trayton Dyer instantly regret his acts of vandalism & inappropriate behavior, the reason he censored words was due to everyone being offended these days by a lot of words.

Trayton Dyer hopes everyone forgives his act of inappropriate behavior & vandalism act's."

The author of this story demanded that this page be unlocked so he can edit it. As I was about to, he got belligerent which resulted in a week long block. He then posted these on his own message wall:

"nedwolfkin is a dick, he need's to stop criticzing horror, he's jealous of writers like me"

"Everyone who's stories were listed under "Crappypasta" don't give up, its this idiot who need's to stop critizing horror, he is obviously not a horror fan, he's jealous of the success of sonic exe and other creepypasta's"

"my story was a masterpiece, it had a couple spelling errors and had too much shock in it but this story didnt deserve to be tore by this idiot whos jealous"

"nedwolfkin is a idiot "

After this, his block was moved to permanent. His tirade didn't stop there, either. He used his sockpupppet to post these messages:

"Why was teddy time deleted? I don't care if u banned me but don't delete that story And how bout u all stop with authors meltdown, stop trying to make me look bad"

"Bitch"

"Birch u should stop hating on sonic exe and my work"

Trayton is sent me a message calling me "jealous". I told him I wasn't, that he should move on, and that I will not be responding to him anymore because I don't like drama. He vandalized my message, calling me a "JEALOUS IDIOT!".

He tried posting this piece of fail again but added "Y'all leave my story on here! I am warning all of you to leave this on here, first off, Ned, your jealous and shut up, second, all of better leave this on here! Ned is gay! " He also added this comment to the page "Y'all ned a idiot!"

He then vandalized my user page multiple times, all of which I reverted.

A few hours later an administrator came on and banned him for three months, giving him a stern warning regarding his vandalism and harassment.

User Postuhenin left him a polite message telling him to stop his bad behavior. He retaliated by sending this message on the Roblox Creepypasta Wiki:

"I know what real harrasment is and i aint no harraser, all i did was call him out for his jealousy and gave him a couple insults, u aint gotta try to give me tips, i know how to handle things, idgaf if he ends his life, people dont end there lifes cuz that, they end there lifes cuz clinical depression. idgaf if they diss my story, that aint what i care about, its if u r a jerk ill insult u, here is a few tips for you

MIND YO DAMN BUINESS AND ILL SHOW U REAL HARRASMENT BOY!

oh and one more thing dude dont gotta explain things to me. IDGAF! I DONT CARE BOUT THERE STYLE, IF THEY END THERE POINTLESS LIVES, JUST STFU BEFORE I REALLY LOSE IT!"

"DONT GIVE ME TIPS OR ILL REALLY LOSE IT!"

"NED, EmpyrealInvective, both of u are idiots, y'all like the old story slenderman and those pointless stories the rake and whatever, fake damn fricking stories that has no point to it and is pointless but u dont like the darkfalls massacre, they tear apart amazing stories like sonic.exe, i demand my story the darkfalls massacre on lolpasta gets the crappypasta tag off that story and give me the damn respect i need to continue my writing"

LOLPasta messages
Trayton: Hey, ned, it's me again, i have every right to edit the darkfalls massacre page, first of all it wasn't vandalism for deleting that "author's meltdown", i wanna edit something else in the story and i have every damn right

Ned: I locked the page because you vandalized it.

Trayton: its my story i have every right to do what i want with it

Ned: First of all, watch your tone. Second, what do you want changed?

Trayton: it wasn't vandalism, it's called defending myself, i wanna edit something in the story, i have every right to do what i want with it don't tell me to watch my tone and i wanna do something diffrent with this story how's it called vandalism, it's my page

Ned: I have blocked you because you're acting hostile (which I had just warned you about). Next week, when the ban ends, I will unlock the page so you can make your edits.

"Braydon": Don't u think u can loosen up on my friend, I'm the darkfalls creator's friend, it's my fault his stories didn't do good, I'm the editor, just give trayton one more chance, his story did good in high school, he was just shocked it didn't do good on here, he behaved like a fucking idiot, I thought teddy time was good, can u tell me what was wrong with it and trayton had that new unfinished book coming out can u let him at least be able to release stories on here? I'm also wondering what was wrong with his stories besides my bad grammar lol, curious why it didn't do good, I thought it was good

Ned: First off, I would like to thank you for being friendly and diplomatic with your approach to the question. As for his TEDDY TIME! story, we're looking for stories that are so bad they're good. No offense or anything, but this story was just bad and didn't have any entertainment value. As much as I would like to "loosen up" on him and give him another chance, it has become apparent that he can't control himself and behave in an acceptable manner. In fact, I was very patient with him. I would have been well within my rights to ban him as soon as he started his first tantrum, but hoped that being patient would work. After he resorted to name calling, spamming, and taking a tone, I pretty much had to ban him because we don't accept that kind of behavior. I hope this helps answer your questions.

(Trayton then made a sockpuppet)

Trayton: I'm trayton dyer, I'm sorry for more innaproiate behavior, please get me unblocked from creepyasta wiki

Ned: I'm not sure if you know this or not, but none of us are administrators for the Creepypasta Wiki. Even if we were, we would not unblock you. You broke the rules and acted belligerent. Simply saying "I'm sorry" isn't going to get you unbanned. My suggestion is that you just wait the ban out and improve your attitude.

Trayton: Why was teddy time deleted? I don't care if u banned me but don't delete that story And how bout u all stop with authors meltdown, stop trying to make me look bad

Bitch

Birch u should stop hating on sonic exe and my work

Ned: I'm not trying to make you look bad, you're doing a good enough job of that yourself. You do something wrong and when you get called out for it, you blame me for your actions. It's like robbing a bank and then blaming the police. This might sound a bit harsh, but you're acting childish. Your poor conduct makes me question rather or not if you're actually even old enough to be on this site, anyway. Instead of getting angry and having a tantrum when you're met with criticism, learn to use it as a tool to grow as an author. I was going to give you constructive criticism about your works, but I now see it would be pointless as you would not take it, you would just get angry about it because it isn't butt-pats. It is obvious that you don't want any real criticism, you're just looking for people who will praise your story. Like I said, no work is exempt from criticism, even if you ask for butt-pats only. If you continue to get angry and have tantrums whenever your stories are met with even the slightest bit of criticism, you will never make it as an author. There has NEVER been a literary work that hasn't had someone say something bad about it. While we do archive bad Creepypastas, your story was just so bad that it had to be deleted. That said, this sockpuppet has been banned permanently like your original account. And as for a side note concerning Sonic.exe, everyone hates it. I'm not the only one who makes fun of it. Ask anyone their opinion, and they will likely tell you that they think it sucks.

Thatowldude: bruh

(After the unban...)

Trayton: Thanks for your honesty about all of my work, no one was ever honest to me so i just wanna thank you for that. Am i allowed to post links of my Wattpad stories, I'll no longer be posting any story on here but I'll still be a active wiki user, i just want to promote stories on here because it's harder getting popularity on wattpad and i just want to make sure it's allowed to promote.

Ned: Yes, you may post links as long as they are on your user page and not as a comment on an unrelated page.

Trayton: i am sorry but i deserve more than this, my story was suppose to deliever a message, the message was "Never give up if a alcoholic" I am dissapointed in all of you for not giving me anything good about my story. Just saying to all the people that read my story "The Darkfalls Massacre" I saw my story and saw some people thought it should be in the fotm and I deserve more than a "Fck you", just don't diss my book without giving me actual criticsm

Long LOLPasta Conversation
Ned: I have deleted your story Mansion Of The Dead because it was reupload of a previously deleted page. Additionally, it hasn't had any improvements since the original.

Trayton: what was wrong with it?

Rigarmortis:: It's not really the place to put it here, and as Ned said, no improvements. Also, it's not a Creepypasta it's more like a CoD knock off..

Ned: First off, it was bolded which made it kind of hideous to look at. Second, there were some spelling issues. Third, the plot felt like a Call of Duty fanfic mixed with Resident Evil. Some of the "scary" things felt out of place and had no purpose to them. Also, it was unfinished. That's also a no-no here.

Trayton: nah, nah, nah, this wasnt a cod, that wasn't were i got my inspirations from, what gave this a cod vibe? it was finished! Guys, that wasnt were I got my inspiration from, it wasn't from those games!

Ned: By "finished" I mean it didn't have all the "chapters" to it. And I know, that's why I said it "felt like".

Trayton: First off it was with the Jeff the killer rip off things, now its this, i get all my inspiration from classics not pointless video games or pointless pasta's

Ned: That's because The Darkfalls Massacre WAS a lot like Jeff. Bullied person becomes killer. It's the same concept. And unlike that, we're not saying you ripped something off, we're pointing out they are similar.

Trayton: jeff the killer wasnt the first to use that concept, Freddy and Jason had similar concepts to jeff, killer gets revenge, why is this zombie story like cod, all my inspiration came from Night of the living dead

Ned: I know Jeff wasn't the first, but we call that the "Jeff formula" on Creepypastas (i.e. online horror stories).

Trayton: this story wasnt anything like cod, how is this like cod?! this story is about a man who has to lead his soldiers, make the right decisions and survive, cod ain't anything like this, neither is resident evil

Omenyaa:  Trayton, I have read through you article and, although extremely bored, I notice that you put a lot of gunfighting and threw in zombies for no good reason. That is why it sounds like a Resident Evil fanfiction rather than a horror story. Also, excusing JTK knock-offs by comparing them to Slasher Movie villains is terrible. At least those movies required hard work to make them what they are.

Trayton: none of my inspiration came from those pointless games, I watched zombie masterpieces and learnt from them, I didn't rip off a video game

Ned: "this story is about a man who has to lead his soldiers, make the right decisions and survive" You just answered your own question right there. "neither is resident evil" I was referring to the zombies when I said about Resident Evil.

Trayton: jeff wasnt the first to use that concept Omenyaa and I don't look up to resident evil, my inspiration came from zombie film masterpiece's, not a pointless game.

Ned: First of all, like I said, we call things Jeff knock-offs if they are similar to him. Second, Resident Evil isn't a pointless game. It is actually very good. At least the first one was.

Rigarmortis:: Trayton I wouldn't call zombie films masterpieces, they're very repetitive :-( (Sort of like your pastas..... no offence.....)

Trayton: dude, i wasn't making fun of it or dissing it, I'm saying i look up to the masterpieces not a video game. The resident evil series isn't good if ask me but that is my personal opinion

Ned: In my opinion The Plague of the Zombies and Night of the Living Dead were the only good ones.

Trayton: rigarmortis, Night of the living dead is a masterpiece! that is one zombie movie which is a masterpiece

Ned: I'm going to steer us back on topic by saying, make sure your next story is complete and try to avoid the mistakes we mentioned.

Trayton: story was completed, chapter 2 just was only half edited, my story was inspired by Night of the living dead, not a video game!

Rigarmortis:: I have not watched NOTLD. But yesyes, gotta improve them stories!! You'll get less negative feedback if you work on improving ur story writing and spelling :-)

Ned: We consider unedited things to be "unfinished" because they aren't completed.

Trayton: just give me a rating, what would you give this from a 1 to 5, I wanna rating, if spelling was fixed what would u give this?

Ned: Honestly, only a 2. Sorry.

Rigarmortis:: I'm with Ned. It's quite boring, and sure the hypothetically fixed grammar knocks it up a bit on the scale, but it's still not very good

Trayton: dam and i was planning on writing more and more zombie books, lol

Ned: Actually, I'm sorry my friend, but I'm going to change my vote to a 1. I would say a zero (becuase I really didn't like any of it), but that isn't a selectable number. You get a one for effort.

Rigarmortis:: Trayton, feel free to write more zombie books for fun, and maybe there's a wiki where you are allowed to post them, but I'm afraid here is not the place ! This is just general criticism for creepypastas you want to write.

Omenyaa: I give it a zero. It bored and confused me more than I could handle. It feels repetitive and the whole narrative sounds generic zombie video game plot.

Ned: I agree with Rigarmortis. I suggest trying the Spinpasta Wiki because of how loose they are with their quality standards.

Trayton: Rigarmortis, what is the point of writing if you don't get anything in return, if don't succeed you give up, that's how it works.

Ned: The point is to keep trying. It's better than just giving up like some sort of quitter.

Trayton: Ned, that is how it work's

Ned: You have two options. 1) Keep trying until you succeed, and achieve your dreams. 2) Give up like a quitter and not get anywhere in life.

Trayton: I'm already not getting anywhere in life, everything I work hard on flops, I was already not getting anywhere.

Rigarmortis:: Don't be so pessimistic, Trayton! :-( You can't get angry at people for criticising your stories if you yourself are not happy with them. It's not about receiving, it's about writing the story and doing the very best you can be, and then when you think you've done the best you can, you can post it on a forum for constructive criticism. Then once you've received ample criticism and go to tweak and finally finish it, and you're happy with it, you can post it (and make sure it's got good grammar)being showered with compliments is nice, but will it really help you?

Ned: It takes some time. You can't expect things to happen right away.

Omenyaa:Trayton, understand that you can't just expect people to not criticize your work. Cristicism is what makes an writer grow. Embrace it and you certainly will do better.

Ned: Exactly. Criticism is a tool that helps you grow. If you act like every bit of criticism is an attack or a sign of defeat, you're not going to get anywhere.

Rigarmortis:: Yes, life is all about trying your best. Once you've got your best, you share it to see how people think if you want it public. Then you tweak it, and try again, and again! It's all about trying, without trying what'd be the fun in it? It's like paper mache, or painting. You make a layer, see how it looks, and keep trying until you've finally got an art piece!

Ned: I suggest you write something, and when your ban on the Creepypasta Wiki expires, post it on the Writer's Workshop. In the meantime, keep working on one.

Trayton: guys, honestly none of my stories were meant for creepypasta's or books, this one was me planing a movie inside my head, the The Darkfalls Massacre was my own vision of horror, I'm so surprised none of you got the references like the "Your next!", that was a reference to the horror film

Rigarmortis:: I... why did you post them on the Creepypasta related wikis then???

Ned: If it was supposed to be a movie, then why not write a script? If you didn't intend for it to be a Creepypasta, then why did you put your stories on Creepypasta sites?

Rigarmortis:: Btw, Scripts are far more handy than writing stories anyway, they're very useful for planning stuff like the story itself, a movie, a comic or an animation. Just a tip B-)

Trayton: there's no where else to post them on, I'm not a creepypasta writer, I'm a short story horror writer

Ned: Wattpad and DeviantArt allow ANYTHING to be posted. You could have posted them there.

Trayton: yall really thought this was a creepypasta, LOL This book was a script for my version of the walking dead, George romero's zombie movies and all the other movies

Ned: Well, I mean, you posted it on the Creepypasta Wiki. What else were we supposed to expect?

Omenyaa:I didn't think it was a creepypasta. It sounded like a RE fanfic.

Ned: "This book was a script for my version of the walking dead, George romero's zombie movies and all the other movies" It really didn't feel like it. Sorry. And you do know that zombie movies take places in different "universes" right?

Trayton: the The Darkfalls Massacre was the same, it was actually just a movie inside my head.

Ned: You mean an idea for a movie. Even then, it, no offense, wasn't good at all.

Rigarmortis:: Literature.Fandom.com is a good place where you can post your stories, if you don't want them to be creepypastas.

Trayton: yea i know that, im saying i took a lot of inspiration from the Romero zombie movies, the walking dead and other zombie movies, Omenyaa, this was more like a movie script not a fanfic

Ned: No, it was more of a fanfic because it wasn't in script form

Trayton: i might become a script writer instead.

Ned: That might be a good idea if you want to write movies.

Rigarmortis:: Trayton why the fuck did you post it in the lolpasta and Creepypasta wiki and then expect us to know it isn't supposed to be a Creepypasta???

Omenyaa:It is not formatted as a script thus it is not a script.

Trayton: i thought you all took it off cuz you knew it wasn't a creepypasta, but true how did u know,

Ned: No, it was tooken down because it sucked. No offense.

Trayton: it was originally meant for a scirpt Omenyaa

Omenyaa:Because it had nothing to do with scary stuff and is more like an action zombie fiction.

Ned: But the point is IT WASN'T A SCRIPT!

Trayton: Im saying it was originally suppose to be a script but I turnt it into a short story

Ned: That's kind of pointless information, but ok.

Rigarmortis:: It got taken down because it wasnt very good and it wasn't scary! we all assumed it was supposed to be a Creepypasta because well...you posted it on a Creepypasta related wiki !!

Trayton: Ned, you wanna hear me say it fine "Im a bad writer" there I said it, is that what you wanted!

Ned: No, not at all. Instead of getting angry over my criticisms, learn from them. Also, I'm going to have to warn you again about your attitude. Remember, I had to ban you last time you got belligerent.

Rigarmortis:: Trayton no one wants you to insult yourself, we just want you to post your non-Creepypasta stories on related wikis for it and to fix your spelling. You needn't get all smug and snide with Ned.

Trayton: i wasnt tryna start a fight, im telling you all I'm a terrible writer

Ned: And we're trying to tell you, use our criticism to improve.

Rigarmortis:: Just calling yourself a terrible writer isn't really doing anything Trayton.

Trayton: i probably just didn't choose the right audience

Ned: Well, I mean, you posted what was supposed to be a script on the Creepypasta Wiki. Not trying to be rude here, just pointing that out.

Rigarmortis:: Right, Trayton, you seem to not really be getting what we’re trying to say. You’ve been a bit incompetent and I would like to make you aware of why we’re all a bit annoyed at you because you seem to be getting a bit confused and annoyed here. First, you posted unedited/unfinished stories. They didn’t meet Creepypasta’s quality standards, so they were marked for deletion. You behaved very poorly, and posted some meltdowns and insulted Ned multiple times. You acted like an angry child. Justifiably, everyone involved is a bit pissed off at you and hasn’t really gotten a good impression of you. Not to mention, you called Ned some very horrible terms as well. Not good at all! Second, you've been having this very ‘Ho-Haa’ attitude and acting all cocky, when we’re trying to explain to you what you’ve done wrong. Third, you wrote a short story, put it on the CREEPY PASTA wiki and then expect people to not call it a Creepypasta?... And somehow it’s a script in your eyes?? I suggest you surf the web a bit, and see if you can find a better place to post your movie ideas. I support you wanting to make movies, and write short stories, but I’m afraid getting angry at people telling you what you’ve done wrong isn’t the way to go!

Trayton: first off i am still young so was that you were acting like a angry child suppose to be a insult, I ain't tryna act cocky, calling him horrible terms, that wasn't even that bad, I've said worst to people so that wasn't even that bad (Not saying I should've insulted him, that was wrong), don't try to shame me for that, don't try. i aint getting angry either.

Ned: I'm sorry, Trayton, but I have to agree with him. Every time you are met with criticism you give excuses, get angry, or talk about giving up. We keep giving you criticism, which we hope helps you, but you reject them for the reasons I just mentioned. You pretty much called me every name under the sun. You called me a bunch of swear words, and to make things worse, you called me "gay", which, I must admit, made you look bad because no one tolerates homophobia. Considering the fact that I actually am gay, makes your homophobia even worse. There is no excuse for it. Honestly, it doesn't matter if you actually are a child. There's not excuse for bad behavior.

Trayton: i ain't homophobic

Ned: Then why did you use "gay" as an insult? That sounds pretty homophobic to me.

Trayton: i aint and don't gotta covience you

Rigarmortis:: Trayton, in short, you were acting very immature, and if you are 14 like you say you are I think you should start acting your age and you shouldn't resort to insulting people. I would like to add I am also 14 and I have not flown into rages like you have or insulted people constantly, so it's not a matter of how old you are it's a matter of maturity. You need to act more mature and then people will take you more seriously.

Trayton: i aint and don't gotta covience you

Ned: You're right. You don't. You can't convince me, anyway. You used "gay" as a slur, so I know you're a homophobe, and nothing you can say can make me think otherwise.

Trayton: my friend is a lesbian, she first came out to me and I didn't care what she was, my uncle is gay and me and him talk and hang out

Ned: That makes your homophobia even more disgusting. The fact that you're using your friends and family members' orientations as an insult makes it obvious you don't accept them for who they are.

Trayton: i only said that because someone said that to me online and made fun of my fcking dad's death, my insults are b*tch, Fck you, I don't usually use gay as a insult!

Ned: First off, what does your dad's death have to do with this? Second, the point is you still called me gay! You clearly think there is something wrong with being gay if you use it as an insult (even if rarely).

Rigarmortis:: Why would you follow in the footsteps of someone who hurt you on the Internet? Wouldn't you try not to be like them? Using gay as an insult is homophobic, Trayton. You're using it as an insult, so you're implying it has bad meaning.

Trayton: im saying someone made fun of his death and called me that so I just use that insult, we really gonna argue all day bout why I'm homophobic, dude i say insults that are even aimed towards me too,

Ned: Honestly, that's still no excuse. As we keep saying, if you use it as an insult, that implies you think it's something bad.

Trayton: we really gonna argue all day why I'm homophobic, Jesus christ, this world is fcked, how old r u Ned, every kid uses that as a insult, even my friend who is a lesbian used gay as a insult

Rigarmortis:: Yeah okay, just because you self deprecate yourself doesn't mean you can do it to others. You used gay as an insult, implying it had a bad meaning, which is homophobic, period. But anyway, in short you've acted like a complete shitbaby and throwing insults at ned isn't really doing anything -

Ned: It's none of your business how old I am. I am an adult, and I don't care what "kids" use as an insult. Even then, that's a poor excuse. Rigarmortis said he was 14, and he knows better. I don't care what your lesbian friend did. Using "gay" as a slur implies you think there is something wrong with it, plain and simple.

Trayton: Rigarmortis, mind yo dam business, calling me this and that, Jesus christ, both y'all make me wanna have a drink

Ned: Rigarmortis can give his two cents if he wants, and as much as he wants. This isn't a private conversation. If he wants to comment on something, he's free to. Quite frankly, I want him to keep calling you out, because I'm pretty much done at this point. I'm going to again warn you to watch your tone, and suggest that you admit what you said was wrong. Either that, or just come out as a homophobe.

Trayton: can we not talk about sexuality

Ned: Fine. I'm just going to end this by pointing out what you did was wrong, especially because of your family and friends.

Trayton: ned i aint a fricking homophobe

Ned: First off, I still don't believe you. Second, you wanted to stop talking about it, so why are you?

Trayton: fine u wanna know why im still talking about it!

Ned: Sure, why? I'm going to again give these pieces of advice. For your work: don't give up, run your stuff through spellcheckers and proof read it, don't use tropes, don't throw random "scary" stuff in just for the sake of it, finish your work, make sure it is edited, and for God's sake, learn to take criticism. As for you, personally: quit getting angry when someone offers criticism, quit getting angry when they tell you to try to improve yourself, quit making excuses, quit having tantrums, quit using your personal problems and age as an excuse, quit ignoring criticism, and quit insulting everyone who says things that you find even lightly offensive.

Trayton: cuz im gay, i dont like talking bout it, there! Now stop calling me a homophobe, I admit it was wrong and I only said it because I heard other kids say it but I hate using that as an insult. I just don't like talking bout sexuality because it makes me ashamed of my fcking self!

Ned: If that's the case, you shouldn't care what other kids say. Try to be more mature than them. Also, there's nothing to be ashamed of yourself over. There is absolutely nothing wrong with being gay. Your friend and uncle should be clear examples that we are just like everyone else, and being gay doesn't make someone a bad person.

Trayton: can we now stop fighting

Rigarmortis:: If you hate using it why keep using it,,

Ned: Yes, we can stop fighting, if you're willing to. But, please, think about what I said about personal improvement.

Trayton: let's stop talking bout sexuality, can you just tell me what i should do with my writing career.

Rigarmortis:: Okay. Well, quoting my previous comments, you should post your non-Creepypasta stories on literature.fandom.com and get constructive criticism on it so you can improve. I'm pretty sure there's a forum on there where you can post your draft.

Trayton: can i post scripts on spin pasta wiki?

Ned: Probably. They're not huge on quality standards.

Trayton: To any fan of my work (Only have 10-20 fans) i will no longer be posting any work on any wiki site (I'll still be active on here just not posting any story), I'll be posting links to my Wattpad short stores, scripts, etc (If I'm allowed to post links), currently the first part of the zombie survival screenplay is in proof reading & editing process.

Rigarmortis: That's fair enough, sometimes you do need a break. I wish you the best Trayton, I don't mean anything against you, I just think you've acted immature in the past. It's good to get away from the Internet for a bit since it can really manipulate you in a negative way sometimes. I wish you the best! :-)

Trayton: dont wish me the best, this aint a break, this me giving up, i only giving up writing not being online. yea i know ive acted immature but i stopped caring a long time ago.

Rigarmortis: oh, okay. Have fun doing whatever then I guess, your choice.

Trayton: Can mansion of the dead please be on here! My action zombie survival has recieved mixed review's, because it received mixed review's i was wondering if it can be on here, just because only a few don't like it and called it a knock off or fanfic doesn't mean it should be taken off how ever it's your site so it's your choice. My opinion is my book has received mixed review's and i think it deserves to be on here, i only want it on here so it can get more and more popularity.

Ned: No, it can't. Like we have said, it's just plain bad. Not so bad it has entertainment value, just bad bad. Even then, I'm assuming you still haven't completely edited it, so that would make it an unfinished page.

Trayton: only 3 of you said it was bad, I'm not fighting against your criticism and i respect your honesty and criticism but it actually received positive reviews and because it received positive feedback i believe it should be on here. no offense to omenyaa, you or rigarmortis but i think you are the wrong audience to enjoy this, i think zombies just isn't your thing but just because only 3 didn't like it mean it deserves to not be on here, you can't speak for others.

Ned: No offense or anything, but I'm pretty sure even zombie fans wouldn't care for it.

Trayton: than explain why i got so many zombies fans interested in it.

Ned: I'm closing this message before you step out of line. Were these actual zombie fans, or just people on Wattpad? Because if it was Wattpad, literally EVERYTHING gets praised over there.

Trayton: I didn't mean to do anything and i don't want a discussion, i just want to say just because 3 don't like something mean it's bad and fine i won't post it on here. just because you don't like something mean it's bad, you can criticize and hate something but it isn't going to be someone else's opinion, remember that and ya I'll drop this talk before you ban me again but last thing is these people were walking dead fans, fans of dawn of the dead and night of the living dead so yah they where real horror fans. Anyway I'm dropping this discussion before i get banned.

(He then spammed his message wall with "fgfffgf" and "fgfgfffgfgf vvbvbv".)

Trayton: IM STUPID! im stupid!

Ned: Final warning, stop spamming!

Trayton: everyone, im trayton and im stupid and mentally retarded!

Ned: You have been banned for one week for ignoring my warning regarding spamming.

Trayton: im so sorry! i left my computer open and went out of my room for something, my fcking sister got in my room and went on my account, please lift the ban, i didn't do anything!

Ned: We usually don't unban people, unless we've made an actual mistake. It's only a week long ban, anyway.

Trayton: c'mon ur punishing me for someone else's actions, plz ned, i didn't do anything, i promise it wont happen again. I PROMISE!

Rigarmortis: bye felecia

Ned: I'll think about it. This isn't a punishment, and I'm not accusing you of doing anything. Think of it this way, even if I decide to keep the block, it's only for one week.

Trayton: bruh really ur gonna say "Bye felecia" lol

Trayton: ned, no need to close that thread I thought it was funny rigarmortis said bye Felica

Ned: I mean it, stop it!

(He continued)

Ned: You are blocked from editing your message wall for one week for your continuous spamming and drama starting. Additionally, because of this, I am denying your request to have your ban turned over.

Permanent Ban

Since you cannot behave like an adult, and have again resorted to childish name calling, I have banned you permanently from this site. I have warned you that if you continue your bad behavior you would be permanently banned from this site, and you ignored that warning. I gave you a second chance, and you blew it.

Braydon: Trayton, u really need to stop acting like this, u are the dumbest son of a bitch I've met so far, I read ur screenplay and it sucks, no offense, you need a break cuz your really losing it! Plz just take a break!

Trelpesta Wiki
Banned from the LOLPasta Wiki, Trayton harassed Ned over the Trelpesta Wiki.

Trayton: bruh who told u were the one to decide what is bad, your opinion is not everyone's opinion, mansion of the dead got a few positive reviews!

Ned: The story was terrible. No more drama!

Trayton: hey ned....... im so sorry for my bad behavior, i behaved like a idiot and i'll face the conquences, i give up writing and everything, dont expect to see me around here again....... im not here to fight you or be a idiot, im here to say sorry and i request "The Darkfalls Massacre" on lolpasta get's deleted, that's all i want now is to take that flop taken down.

Ned: Alright, it's been deleted. You don't have to give up writing, though. You just need practice and to use criticism as a tool to improve.

Trayton: thx for deleting it, i give up everything dude, life, my future, my writing, everything

Ned: You're welcome. And like I said, you don't have to give up anything, you just need practice. Don't let a bad experience ruin your entire life. Find a hobby you enjoy, stick with it, and practice. There is a lot more to life than just horror stories.

Trayton: its not that that might drive me to comit suicide, its i wont get free from addiction problems or the depressing thoughts

Ned: Have you considered seeking help? And if you don't mind me asking, what are you addicted to?

Trayton: sorry, i had a depressing moment, im a 14 year old recovering from alcohol addiction, im sorry i was hard on u guys, im just right now struggling with staying alcohol free, im getting help right now

Ned: I'm glad to hear you're getting help, and wish you good luck.

Trayton: yea, im just sorry for my rage, i hope u all forgive me, im going to take a break from writing, take down every story on each website i went on, read others stories, learn how to write horror, when im ready to take criticsm ill restart my writing career than maybe i might release my original idea's to the public, teddy time was suppose to be a clown story but one of my friends accused it of being a rip off of stephen kings it, the darkfalls massacre wasnt suppose to be a massacre cliche gorefest, it was suppose to be a story focused on the evil sprit "Shadow" haunting jerry, please give me a list of good creepypasta's to read, no bad creepypasta's please! oh and one more question dude, did my original idea's for my works sound better than what made it into my stories? ill learn how to write creepypasta's by reading other's stories, thats why i want a list of good creepypasta's thx dude

Ned: You're welcome. If you decide to start writing again, I suggest running it through the Creepypasta Wiki's Writer's Workshop so users can help with any issues it might have.

Trayton: LOL, ill be honest teddy time and the darkfalls massacre weren't properly edited, tell anyone i was mean to i said "im sorry", im not saying this to get unblocked, i really do feel terrible for the things i said, just tell em i said im sorry oh and one more thing can i post remakes of other people's creepypasta's if i credit them on wiki's, i saw one and i thought it deserved a remake

Ned: You won't be able to write a remake on the Creepypasta Wiki. That would most likely go against their no-Spinoff rule.

Trayton: the story i wanna remake was tooken down but i feel like it was so bad it deserved a remake

Ned: You could always try a spin-off appeal by either posting it to the Writer's Workshop or the Spinpasta Wiki, then going through the appeal process (when your ban expires, of course).

Trayton: LOL that gonna be a long time

Ned: Only three months. In the mean time, write it and keep working on it until the ban expires. Additionally, you aren't banned from the Spinpasta Wiki, so you can post it there when it is done.

Trayton: i wanna thank u for your criticsm, ur right, i can use it as a tool, first i'll learn how to take criticsm first before writing im remaking mr.widemouth, i know the story is terrible but dude i could make it better, that story was badly written, it deserves something at least a little better

Ned: Actually, Mr. Widemouth is still on the Creepypasta Wiki.

Trayton: WTF!? i hate to break this to u if a fan of that story but it sucked!

Ned: I actually liked it.

Trayton: nah not that one, this one, click the link https://lolpasta.fandom.com/wiki/Mr_widemouth its this one

Ned: Oh, ok. I thought you meant the original (link here). But you're right, that one on the LOLPasta Wiki sucks.

Trayton: anyway, c ya dude, but before i go, u forgive me?

Ned: Yes, I do. Bye.

Trayton: bye hey ned, on spinoff wiki can i post spin off's that arent horror?

Ned: I don't think so. Check the site rules.

Trayton: hey ned, hope your having a good day, i know u probably can't do this but can you reupload "The Darkfalls Massacre", i've learned how to take criticsm and i shouldn't be ashamed of my flops, every author has had a flop, this horror story didn't do the best, only a few thought it was ok but most hated it and my editors loved it, ned also, can i upload more stories onto Lolpasta, i've learned how to take criticsm and control my anger, i want to upload a few creepypasta's to Lolpasta to get my writing bigger, i'm not having luck on wattpad. I've decided to write still, ive learned to take criticsm in a positive way and the last question i have for you, i wanna upload the original Darkfalls Massacre to creepypasta wiki, i want to upload the original version with all my idea's, the original is diffrenent, the original was going to be more about Shadow haunting Jerry but my friend's turned it into a gorefest, would creepypasta wiki let me upload the original version to there website, i know techinally they are the same story but trust me the original was going to be tottaly diffrent, there was going to be no killing's in it, no killer going crazy, none of that, i hope i hear back from u

Ned: Ok, I have reuploaded the story to the LOLPasta Wiki, and I have unbanned you (under the condition that you abide by our etiquette rules). As for the Creepypasta Wiki, I suggest taking it to the Writer's Workshop, as you wouldn't even be allowed to upload it if improvements are made. Like I said, you can use the deletion appeal and use that WW page as a reference.

Trayton: hey ned, when i'm done and post this story about the rake, will you read it for me and review it?

Ned: If I have time. I'm getting a bit too busy, and will very soon be absent from the internet.

Trayton: To anyone that was treated bad by me Postuhenin, ned and that other admin, i am sorry, i feel terrible for all the bad things i said, i regret every bad word and everything, my last request to u ned is the darkfalls massacre on lolpasta get's deleted, just do me that favor, i don't want anyone to know on wiki to know i even exist, i want to disapear from everything, just delete all my stories please, thank u.

(In another thread)

Trayton: bruh really! ned Who voted u to be the big critic huh! your opinion is not everyone's! Only 3 hated my story, that isn't a lot of hate to consider it bad!

Ned: I'm only responding to this once and then I'm going to ignore you because all you're doing is trying to start drama. Your story wasn't that good. This is going to sound harsh, but it's true. No offense, but it's likely that the people who liked it only did so because they know you're young and felt sorry for you, or they were young themselves and don't know any better. Honestly, there's probably more people who think it's bad. They're probably just being polite and not commenting on how bad it sucks. Either that, or they read a bit of it, see it's awful, and then give up. Take my advice and DROP! THE! SUBJECT! Additionally, if you don't stop complaining, I'm going to expand your ban on LOLPasta to an entire month because you've been doing this crap over there, too.

Trayton: no one even knew my age, i ain't tryna start drama, im telling you no one voted you to be the big critic! Admit it, you ain't no zombie fan so you cant decide if its bad, your just a dck head critic!

Ned: Final warning. Quit whining, or I'll permaban you from LOLPasta.

Trayton: ill give u a example, carrie the classic horror story was destroyed by critics but the truth was it was good, never listen to critics like u, all yall just want kids to give up there dreams, huh u probably just want kids to suffer and give up there life, huh btch ban me! idgaf, ur a ashole! ashole! ashole ashole ashole ashole ashole ashole ashole stupid btch im 14, why the fck woiuld i act like a adult

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Ned: It's spelled "Asshole".

Trayton: u probably faked being gay to make us feel sorry for u LOL

Ned: I don't want anyone to feel sorry for me. You're the one who faked it to justify your homophobia.

Trayton: ashole stfu we all know u faked it so we all feel sorry for u, this is you "I hope this kid kills himself because i know he is poor and imma destroy his only one dream which is being a writer"

Ned: I don't have to prove anything to you. Also, it's really insane of you to think that I'm personally attacking you, when all I'm doing is telling you the harsh truth that the story is no good.

Trayton: you think im suppose to be sane after all the things done to me! you just wanna make kids give up dreams admit it!

Ned: Whatever. I was the one telling you not to give up, but since you want to use me as an excuse as to why you're a total quitter, I don't care.

Trayton: Bitch, you will burn in hell anyway.

Ned: Nope. I'm saved by the blood of Jesus.

Trayton: u aint a excuse, u make kids wanna give up there dreams!

Ned: "u aint a excuse" Dude, learn how to spell if you're going to insult me.

Trayton: lol why would i wanna spell, i don't give a fuck bout spelling, you expect me to keep sane, don't you fucking get it, life is pointless! everything is pointless, all this criticsm! all this bullshit! everything is pointless!

Ned: First off, if your sanity is slipping over marginal shit like stories, then you should see a psychiatrist. Second, you should improve your spelling so people know what you're saying. That's one of the problems with your stories, and your messages suffer much worse. Also, quit with the emo-edgelord stuff.

Trayton: i don't give a fuck, im not insane, I'm telling you right now life is pointless and call me what u want, i ain't insane u gonna make me! huh, c'mon insult me, make my day!

Ned: I'm ending this conversation right now because it's obvious that all you want is a fight, and I'm not giving it to you. I don't care if you're 14, that's not an excuse for behaving badly.

Trayton: c'mon make my day! ggghgh i don't want a fight, i want motivation to kill myself

Ned: I'm leaving this link here that shows that you threated to kill yourself in the above comment

Trayton: h gg gh g g

Ned: Dude, knock it off. Suicide is a very serious subject, and you shouldn't joke about it. If you are actually feeling suicidal, I suggest getting help.

Trayton: dude, im sorry, i get sad easily, i have alot of mood problems, sorry

"Braydon": Trayton, act mature, Jesus Christ so many replies and why was that reply removed?

Rigarmortis: Oh no, that was my reply, I removed it because Ned told me to via discord since he didn't want Trayton to keep moaning to someone

DarknessReaper9 closed this thread, citing: "Trayton being Cringe."

Trayton: continue closing threads idgaf Bruh that is your opinion, rigarmortis opinion and omenyaa's opinion but not everyone's, you shouldn't be a fcking critic cuz all you do is tell people there story is bad and don't even try to help them, bruh you said my fanbase was full of people who weren't experienced with zombies or were lying or underaged, bruh what a real dck move saying that!

DarknessReaper9: Kiddoerino, This wiki is for what it says. Trollpastas, or "Memepastas." Not you to complain about the Founder of the LOLpasta wiki. So as it seems, you've been blocked. However, since the rule system is supposed to allow a warning, consider this your warning. I'll unblock you now, but quit your shit, ok? I don't have the tolerance of Ned, so don't expect it. Actually, Nevermind, you got your stupid ass blocked across FANDOM, so I can't really unblock you, sucks for you I guess.