Talk:Jeff the Killer/@comment-36627132-20200612054909

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Finally got the patience to read it through to the end and I wasn't disappointed. I would love a new story about his actions immediately after murdering his family. TheInfamousProject 22:50, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

The picture has always scared the crap out of me, and the first portion of the pasta wasn't bad. But the rest of it felt a little tacked on. The fight descriptions got a bit tedious, and the latter chunk just didn't seem all that scary. Not to mention the editing, it's hard to read a story when it's interrupted mid-sentence every other line. Started off better than it finished, I'd say focus more on things like the first portion. FRay 09:44, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

oh, god, that thing has a name?? aaanyway, the first part was good, the second one was okay-ish... i got mixed up with all the line breaks and some wrong grammar and spelling. could you fix it, please? it's a cool story. [https://web.archive.org/web/20121015052024/http://creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/User:Spikeyxashe "I have not...come this far...to die now." -Nick] 10:35, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

next time don't type it in notepad and copy it over here, use word or something Gedet 13:40, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Needs moar paragraph. AlixeTiir the herpa-derpa-durr 23:44, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, straightened that out. Sweet Clyde that's a long story.

I love how it is called Jeff, Yet the picture suggests it is a girl.. Revenge v Pro 17:21, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

What a twist. ChromeWolf 03:51, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

uhh what? Michael haze 22:58, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

jesus christ who the hell foresaw this This signiature is cake 02:02, November 16, 2011 (UTC)

I've been wanting to ask... What kind of a name is Liu anyway?
 * It's a fairly common chinese name. The original spelling of the name is 劉. - Tehtumpi 17:30, March 16, 2012 (UTC)

I reviewed this on my profile... --Dmports 07:46, June 9, 2012 (UTC)

 Jeff is Awesome!
--Kai Schrader22:35, November 7, 2011 (UTC) {C {C I actually think that Jeff the killer is beautiful he also seemed kinda sweet, you know, before the whole fight incident. I love this story so freaking much! I have read it like forty times and I still can't get enough of it!I do wish that I could meet Jeff in real life and tell him that he IS beautiful. <3 lolwut7Rey 01:02, November 13, 2011 (UTC) OH GOD HOW DID THIS GET HERE I AM NOT GOOD AT WIKIS

lulwut

 Nice story :D
The scariest thing about this pasta is the picture (good god), which does spice it up. I wouldn't call it "scary", but it's a really awesome story.

Acidpop 23:41, December 20, 2011 (UTC) acidpop

 Finally My Question is answered
For like a long time I asked what was "Go To Sleep"? I looked everywhere on google for it. I didn't know he, or it had a name. Everytime that pic pops up it makes me jump. Tiff1234 00:29, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

Not great
This story was crap to be honest, badly written and nothing all that special to it.

Darth Hendrix 03:15, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

This has never scared me. I've always grinned ear to ear (not quite, I'll get there some day!) and laughed right along. If he came for me, we would likely exchange maniacal laughter and I would die with a smile on my face.

Now, all we need is another kid who later wears a bat costume who confronts jeff when they grow up....But really

he reminds me of joker--Heavy17915123 14:34, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Retarded story. Tired of hearing about it. Bye Snazzell 23:13, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

LOL who wrote this? a 5 year old? srsly, they're grammar is sh**. and yes, i realize i'm not writing properly here, but its the comment section so who cares? but if you're going to write a story at least write it well...also, the whole thing was way too stereotypical...way too kiddy
 * I'm rather inclined to agree, not so much with the grammar, but the plot is fairly juvenile. The way the author doesn't even seem to be aware that the parents' behavior is neglect bordering on abuse, or that law enforcement can't actually convict you, these things make me wonder if s/he really IS 10-13 years old.Neo Bahamut 20:22, May 21, 2012 (UTC)

Well said! Thanks for agreeing :P

This has got to be the WORST story I've ever read. Soooo many logical fallacies and impossiblities in it. The picture is pretty freaky and is actually well done, though. TacoExitMan (talk) 19:47, August 8, 2012 (UTC)TacoExitMan

It's a very flawed story, but it's that freakin' picture... MeltingObject (talk) 16:50, August 31, 2012 (UTC)

 This picture used to scare me
USED to. Now that I've read the story, I understand who the creepy face in the picture is, and can sympathise with the character. Instead of being something nameless and creepy, I now have a name to match to the face. The unknown is the biggest fear, and knowing who that is supposed to be makes it far less creepy. Mdcowboy 05:22, February 14, 2012 (UTC)Mdcowboy

not as scary as i thought

I think it's the fire that affected his mind as before he was set on fire jeff said whats so funny? showing that then he sainty. Well enough to say those words, but it could be perment brain damage caused by the pain killers. Obsidian Rocks 07:37, February 21, 2012 (UTC)

Is it just me?
Or does Jeff kinda look like the humanish version of Smile Dog? xD I mean I see a bit of a resemblance in terms of the smile and big scary face.

The story is pretty good by the way, I enjoyed it. ^.^ Just that I hate that goddamn picture. My friend posted it on my facebook wall once since she knows it scares the shit out of me. ItsUnoriginal 02:05, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

 I know where the image comes from
It's a screencap from a scene in the surrealist David Lynch film "Inland Empire". I can't believe than NO-ONE has pointed that out. - Tehtumpi 07:08, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

Well, it was good, the story is okay in my opinion. But please just avoid going from third to first person in some lines. Also the story takes a little twist so give more information about it. But all in all good story and also great picture.Markdraco12 22:44, March 14, 2012 (UTC) MarkDraco12

I always thought this face belonged to some sort of phantasm or some non-human creature. Good thing that the picture still unnerves me related to a childhood event, because the pasta completely removes anything scary. Alonzo Typer 09:13, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

A bit unrealistic. Kids with guns and knifes? Really?Pellyeve93 11:34, March 18, 2012 (UTC) Hungary Turtles for life.

From ZeroLifePlus,

( bit unrealistic. Kids with guns and knifes? Really? )

umm i happen to be 14 and there were 3 deaths in the last few

years from kids with guns and knifes to other kids. there are also

kids my age bringing shit like that to school lol

....Really?
As much as I love the characters and stuff ( Even though I hate those thugs Randy, Troy and Keith >:| ), I expected more from the pasta. A lot more. It's actually pretty awful if you ask me. I found a rewritten version on DeviantART, and I think many would prefer it. If so, can I replace the crappy old version with the Rewritten one?

Thanks! Smileinabiscuitlegsbeatmeinabox is my name. FEAR ME AND SPREAD THE WORD! 22:30, March 21, 2012 (UTC)

lolno Contr KOROMO Talk 22:51, March 21, 2012 (UTC)

Posting it is one thing, that might be allowed, but not replacing the original with it entirely HeavyMetalProphet (talk) 02:42, September 3, 2012 (UTC)

Wtf
So THAT'S how the joker got those scars.

Name
Would it help if I pointed out if pointed out that because "the" isn't an active word, it need not be capitalised and therefore the correct title for this article is "Jeff the Killer". However, may I point out I found the whole story extremely entertaining and I reckon it would be very useful as a bedtime story.--Launchballer 21:30, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

The only Creepypasta that prevents me from sleeping. O~O

 Most Ridiculous Thing I Have Ever Read
I want to walk you through my thoughts as I read this: First thing I see, horrible title, a newspaper wouldn't pick something catchier? Whatever. Alright, so I keep reading, and that wasn't so bad, pretty okay creepypasta. Oh, there's more? Expositon, exposition...wait, what? The action movie brawl isn't scary to begin with, but you're telling me these kids are 11 and 12? You have GOT to be joking. Well, the cops sure are taking things seriously, if they're threatening to shoot a kid armed only with a pocketknife who's nowhere near them. Okay, so, the kid was just taken off to juvie, no trial, no forensics, no arguments, no interrogation, what's more important is what the family wears to some brat's birthday party? Best. Parents. EVER. I'd be really sad if they died. Oh Lord, Round 2: The kiddies have guns this time! And the strength to throw people like ragdolls! Where is everyone, anyway, is there no one in the house? Oh, they're just watching, that's special. The fist stopped his heart, heh, what is this, Mortal Kombat? Hey, I think I saw this next part in Batman: The Animated Series. And the mother shows her good parenting skills again with a 12 second hospital visit. Meh, at least she showed up. And the cops aren't even going to bother, oddly enough, that is an increase in competence for them. Oh, now they're going to shoot him, that is exactly the logical way to handle a problem child. Well, I suppose it is when you gave birth to the bastard child of Superman and the Joker. So, Jeff is the killer, and he murdered his parents and brother in a ridiculously gory fashion. Didn't see THAT coming at all. The thing about the guy who was followed by blood everywhere he went until they shot him into space and it turned out that guy was me (and a lady if I am a lady) was scarier than this.Neo Bahamut 00:30, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

Exactly what I was thinking! I also love how it switches from past to present tense a couple of times. Also, what kind of a doctor did he go to? "Hmmm, your son was severely burned, I wrapped some bandages around his face for a couple weeks, that should do it." Really? No plastic surgery or anything? Oh, I also liked, "Some times painkillers make people act like psychopaths." That being said, I guess the incompetence of the medical staff shouldn't be too surprising since apparently Jeff and friends are living in a police state. Like seriously, "Huh, this kid said he stabbed another kid, 1 year in juvie (as you pointed out) no trial or anything. Also from the story, 'After all the witnesses told the police that Randy confessed of trying to attack you, they decided to let Liu go.', oh good, I'm glad the POLICE are the ones making those decisions, not like, a judge or something. After Liu was taken I kept waiting for one of his parents to be like, "so lawyers are cool" but NOPE! Instead it was all, let's go to a party. WTF! Also, what was the deal with getting dressed up? I kept waiting for that to pertain to the plot in some way but as far as I can tell it didn't (I could be wrong here). I honestly think a better story could be written about the coldness of the parents. After all, these were people who just left their son at a hospital, and then PLANNED ON SHOOTING HIM. Oh, speaking of shooting people, I like how the three 12 year olds walk into a house filled with adults and just start unloading on Jeff. Seriously, I really want to know what their end game on that one was. Also cool how the adults didn't try to you know, reason with them or overpower them or anything like that. Also, there's this thing called subject verb agreement that is pretty useful, just in case anyone wants to look into it before they write another story. Here are a couple of my favorite lines from the story:

'he got a weird feeling. Not so much a pain, but... a weird feeling. He dismissed it as just some random feeling.' - Wait, so what kind of feeling was it?

'While the alcohol burned him, the bleach bleached his skin.'

'The kid seems to be about twelve; one year younger than Jeff. He wears a Aeropostale shirt and ripped blue jeans.'

Okay, maybe I'm being a little harsh. I don't know the history behind the picture or story, so it's possible that certain elements had to be added to make the story make more sense. It's also possible that the author is a non-native english speaker or very young. If this is the case than you can disregard most of my comments. But come one man, it's like you didn't even try to make it realistic.
 * I considered the possibility that the author is very young. In that very unlikely case, I would hope that a kid competent enough to write a lengthy scary story that makes some amount of sense & post it on the internet for all to see is competent enough to learn from his or her mistakes. With the parents, I thought someone could have called...oh, who am I kidding, the story practically beats you over the head with the premise that everyone has guns & is ready & willing to use them. Someone should have just shot the kid. You have a point with the dress-up, I didn't even notice how conspicuous it is: It is the ONE time someone acts like the behavior is abnormal, & it's apparently just to be proven wrong in order to further drive home the point that Adults Are Useless. At the risk of sounding like a parrot, I definitely agree, a lot of these portrayls are so horribly off that they'd make good story subjects themselves.Neo Bahamut 01:24, May 25, 2012 (UTC)

LMAO!! You my friend couldn't be ANYMORE RIGHT about this story!!! Amazing review, 5 stars!! Srsly, this review is way more entertaining than the freakin story itself. I'm dying from laughter xD
 * Thanks. I actually forgot a couple of my complaints when I wrote that. There was just so much to cover, it might have been twice as big before I cut out a lot of the explanatory points (particularly about police procedure) to make it less of a word wall.Neo Bahamut 22:31, May 21, 2012 (UTC)

Very scary but it got a liutttle hard to read IN THE MID POINT I think that next time just make it short and sweet like maybe 30 lines should do it but at the end of the day it is your article so do what you want to it cheers manMrbrosnan1 15:01, May 6, 2012 (UTC)
 * The picture is creepy. I will give it that.Neo Bahamut 03:10, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

Wow that was scary. Good article a little long but that is good. Keep up the good work. I love your article and I hope that Jeff does not come for me. Wow that article is scary. Good job though.YukiFushioshi84 12:05, May 12, 2012 (UTC)

picture:scary story:it's good but needs a bit of work... This is just my honest opinion.

 Can't unhear this as Jeff's voice.
For some reason, every time I read one of Jeff's lines, I always imagine his voice being the same as Crispin Freeman's in his role as Alucard from the Hellsing Ultimate OVA. For those of you that don't know, here's an example: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Dx9ac1BZRIY

And since I'm actually a little curious now, I'd like to ask this: what do you all imagine his voice would sound like?

Shinryu-82 03:50, May 27, 2012 (UTC)
 * Pre-exposition: A gruff, grating kind of tone. Post-exposition: A whiny, high-pitched, cracking one.Neo Bahamut 03:41, May 28, 2012 (UTC)
 * I think he sounds like the Grifter. Also, whats up with the weird formating right here? DanMacintosh 17:24, June 12, 2012 (UTC)
 * When he is killin' people, I think he would sound like Seth from Red Dead Redemption. Seriously, just search him on youtube. I'd like some PWNCAKE 01:07, June 23, 2012 (UTC) UPDATE! At this edit, I got the (Don't) Go To Sleep medal, which features Jeff the Killer as the image. That kinda creeped me out. I'd like some PWNCAKE 01:09, June 23, 2012 (UTC)

 Jeff is Real?
While I was searching "Jeff the Killer" I came across THIS!

It's a Wikipidea page about a man named Jeffrey Dahmer, who just so happens to be a serial killer...

Was this Jeffrey Dahmer the insperation to Jeff the killer?

We don't truly know who's good nor evil. It's only what the reasons ae for thier actions that determine who they are... 23:34, June 3, 2012 (UTC)

This story really scares me :( I hate the picture

Its way to obvious that picture is photo shopped. can't any of you tell?

the story wasn't so bad though

I don't wanna sound rude, but are you 10? Maybe there was some inspiration from ol' Dahmer, but he didn't have psychic powers and shit. Might wanna read that article a bit more closely next time. DanMacintosh 17:22, June 12, 2012 (UTC)

Well the talk is at 69, so I'm going to post this to get off that number, all I have to say is this is the perfect example of something that's scary that's not really threatening, it makes it hard for me to sleep, simply because that picture is creepy as hell, but the story is kind of silly, I mean, a guy going insane isn't exactly unheard of, and if he's such a killer, how come no one calls the cops on him?

THIS STORY IS GOD!!!

The best pasta ive read yet, I used to think it it was a girl and i thought the storyy was called the girl from caralina

LOLzie! GJ keep dat good shit up

The coat 91 02:00, June 24, 2012 (UTC) The coat 91

If this is the best pasta you've ever read, you must have never read any pasta before in your life. Or you could just be 9 years old.Make sense does not this. (talk) 17:37, September 2, 2012 (UTC)TacoExitMan

 what's the source of this picture?
Can anyone confirm that it's photoshopped? Or where does this picture come from? Did it just appear on the internet?

It's fake... just like everything else here... Take me out of darkness, walk me out of blindness, lift me out of sadness, save me from my damned-ness 15:36, July 2, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah I understand that, but what's the source of the picture? I'm just interested in the source.Almost Sane 18:04, July 2, 2012 (UTC)

t's a screencap from a scene in the surrealist David Lynch film "Inland Empire". I can't believe than NO-ONE has pointed that out. - Tehtumpi 17:50, July 16, 2012 (UTC)

Jeff = Joker knockoff
Okay, this story was well written and wasn't bad at all; however, towards the end of the story, I saw just how similar Jeff was to the joker. Not cool at all... Every other story that involves Jeff just proves that he's just a dumbed-down version of the Joker with a lower level of thinking. -- Evra the Lost 17:39, July 15, 2012 (UTC)

Not at all. He is validation of the Joker's idea of reality. As this story shows, all it takes really is just one bad day. Panic the Wolf (talk) 03:41, July 20, 2012 (UTC)Panic the Wolf

No the story is actually extremely badly written, and VERY bad. and yes he is a massive Joker ripoff.TacoExitMan (talk) 20:01, August 8, 2012 (UTC)TacoExitMan

(In)Famous
I loved the newspaper excerpt. Though, the story was very meh. The picture always scares the heck out of me. The newspaper gets a 9.6/10, the story gets a 8.6/10, and the picture gets a 10/10.

I've found only one pasta that is better than the original. The rest is either mediocre, or a smudge on Jeff's white sweatshirt (that isn't blood). Unsane (talk) 00:19, July 27, 2012 (UTC) Added by Jimmy Pilkens

 Didn't live up to the hype
This was major let down in the story department. "Hey you go to juvie cause we're cops so we aren't worried

about doing a real assault investigation." I

realize it was needed for the story, but kinda ruined it for me. 3/5 Foxgear (talk) 20:05, July 31, 2012 (UTC)Foxgear

The best pasta ive read yet, if you really complain that its fake, all creepypastas are usually fake, so why complaine about this one, look at the chapters in minecraft, THAT is by far the worst creepypastat ive read yet, but any ways brb lol htc ltm bro whta evas.

The coat 91 (talk) 17:48, September 4, 2012 (UTC)The coat 91

There were flaws to this, but Jeff is a popular guy now and I almost adore him. Kudos. LeahRawrzzz (talk) 23:36, September 28, 2012 (UTC) Forever searching for Slendy.

Origins
I always wondered what was Jeff The Killer original face without that photoshop, it looks like the Joker,

Also thats alot of text!