Nitpick Archive 13

SpongeB0b's Schizophrenia
Every now and again a wiseguy shows up with the crazy belief that the longer a Creepypasta is, the better. Anyone with a brain can tell you that this is not true, and goes against the concept of a SHORT horror story. Spongeb0b's Schizophrenia is one of these stories.

Hello, I'm Aidan

Well, at least the author had the sense not to go I WONT TELL U MY NAEM! I PRUTECT IDENNIDY!. Also, big "shock" that his name ends with -an, -en, or -in.

'''and I'm writing this blog about a series called Spongebob’s Schizophrenia. In recent times, a tape has been discovered in the Nickelodeon Studios. It is a Betamax tape with the writing, "SPONGEBOB SEASON 10 PREMIERE EPISODE." The episode is called "Spongebob’s Schizophrenia."'''

I'm not going to bother to point out that Betamax was already out by the time SpongeBob was made.

'''According to sources, the episode starts in Spongebob's house. He looks crazy and is saying "The shadows play with me."'''

You can't not laugh at this!

He then laughs manically.

So was I after I read that incredibly lame thing he just said.

The strange thing is, Spongebob's voice sounds like a demon's. Spongebob starts to ooze foam from his mouth, and he takes an Antipsychotic pill.

Like the kind you... no, you know what, I'm going to be nice. Like the kind Patrick should be taking... and the main character.

'''The pill fails to work, and Spongebob takes out a cartoony pistol and kills Gary. His body isn't shown.'''

I don't know what made this less impacting, the fact that it was "cartoony" or the fact that we're told that an animal was murdered in just a few short words.

Squidward then yells to Spongebob, "SPONGEBOB, SHUT UP!"

Where the fuck did he come from? I'm going to try to make sense of this and imagine he's screaming this from his window.

'''and Spongebob looks straight at Squidward. He says, "The shadows shall engulf you, mere mortal. Give praise to them or perish," and Squidward says, "Whatever," and returns to bed.'''

LOL! This story is funny!

A time card appears saying "25 Past Midnight” with a strange sound in the background. Squidward is shown sleeping for nearly a minute. Squidward wakes up, and sees a square shadow holding a chainsaw.

The Bikini Bottom Chainsaw Massacre. A classic film about SpongeFace chasing Squidy Hardesty with a chainsaw.

'''He screams as the shadow revs up the saw. The screaming was like a real person shouting, not cartoony.'''

I don't know why, but I was expecting this cliche to show up here.

'''He keeps screaming over the sounds of the saw. The shadow puts the saw to Squidward's body'''

The poor choice of phrasing made this scene dull.

'''and Squidward screams as he is being cut up, and blood splatters on the wall. Then he died, and Spongebob emerges from Squidward's door, holding his cartoonishly-severed head.'''

No! Really? It was cartoonish? I would have thought it was hyper realistic! Shoot!

He feasts on it, and laughs maniacally.

The author clearly didn't care about this story being long as fuck, so why they chose not to go into detail is beyond me.

'''He then runs to his house again and emerges with a pair of knives. He runs to Patrick's house.'''

He screams, "oH paTRicK! cOMe AnD pLay wiTh mE!!,"

Why did you write that in mocking style text? Were you making fun of him?

'''as he stabs Patrick repeatedly. Spongebob then draws a pentagram on Patrick's floor. He sacrifices Patrick's corpse.'''

SATAN AND HIS SYMBOLZ R SCURY!!!!

'''There is literally no sound for this seven second sacrifice. Spongebob laughs again, and runs to his house. He is seen at a table with Squidward's partially-eaten head, brain exposed and eyeballs hanging out, and says, "My beautiful honey, will you marry me?"'''

What is this, a Trollpasta?

as Squidward's left eye blinks once, revealing he is alive, but slowly suffering and dying.

However the fuck that's possible.

'''His skin sheds, leaving only muscle and tissues exposed, and his facial organs and nerves snap and fall apart. His head is now nothing but a pile of random organs, and his eye blinks again. The bubble transition shows, and for thirty seconds, Spongebob is shown kissing the pile of organs, and putting a ring on it inside of a church.'''

Did he hire a priest to officiate his union with them? Also this is a total Jeff-knock-off moment. He openly carries orangs throughout town and hires a priest, who clearly had nothing better to do that day.

'''Spongebob looks demonic and says to Squidward's organs, "I am your lord and savior, Bikini Bottom. Praise me." As the episode ends with Spongebob committing suicide by stabbing himself in the heart, at least, that's the only point the contents of the tape are known up to.'''

"contents of the tape are known up to". Your grammar be good!

The episode was written by Jill Frances and Phillip Refkenski, and animated by a person named Jorges Pubenstein.

PUBE-enstein.

The tape itself was watched by the Spongebob staff, and they were put into medical help right after watching.

TOTALLY NOT CLICHE! Also, why?

Reports vary, but it was said that when questioned, they all refused to tell what happened after Spongebob committed suicide,

I DID NOT STEAL THIS FROM SOMEWHERE ELSE! THIS IS MY OWN IDEA!

'''and when they were insisted, they still refused. No one knows WHAT those employees saw, and no one will ever know the full truth. There have been many attempts to find the tape, but no one has ever found it. The only things that remain are a few screenshots of the episode, and a possible audio track of the episode. The audio track lasts ten minutes, but strangely enough, after six minutes, the audio is merely a strange static sound, but at nine minutes in, a strange, loud, distorted audio can be heard.'''

Someone put a tape recorder inside your brain.

'''A couple of days ago, I was mailed a tape that was from "John Deff". I decided looked up this person’s name and surprisingly he works at Nickelodeon, and I also got a letter from him.'''

Apparently Nickelodeon studios has an endless supply of stationary so their crew members can write letters to the kiddies who see their scary shit that's not supposed to be released.

"Dear Aidan, I have noticed that you are interested in this "series" of ours.

You can't use quotation marks within quotation marks, genius!

'''This tape I have mailed you contains the episode you were talking about in your blog. The head director of the animation department told me to burn the tape. I didn’t listen to his orders and kept the tape for myself. I’ve seen the tape for myself months prior and kept it. I found your blog when looking up Spongebob’s Schizophrenia. After some thinking, I decided to mail it to you. Please take care of it and don't tell anyone else about it. -John”''' Tom

>Receives letter from Kyle telling him to destroy disk

>Doesn't listen Authorofthisshit

>Receives letter from Nickelodeon employee, telling him not to tell anyone about it

>Doesn't listen '''I opened the box and it contained the tape John previously mentioned in his letter. The tape had some writing reading "Spongebob Season 10 Premiere". So I played it on my VCR.'''

It showed what I said for 6 minutes in my previous blog.

You had a perfectly good chance to show us the main character getting scared by it, bust missed that opportunity.

'''Then, Spongebob kills himself at the 6:24 mark and abruptly cuts to the Krusty Krab. It showed inside the restaurant, it looked so abandoned. Mr. Krabs was just standing looking at a wall. He walks to his office door passes out he opened his office door. It zoomed into the door and for about a second, some image flickered on the screen for a millisecond.'''

I doubt ANYBODY would be able to catch a milisecond flash!

'''I couldn’t tell what the image was I didn’t want to know what the image was. The kitchen was shown with what looked like a mountain of dead bloody fish bodies. It cuts to Sandy's dome where Sandy is sitting on a chair next to a noose looking depressed. Sandy puts the noose around her neck and kicks the chair. Her lifeless body is shown swinging side to side slowly for a solid minute. The tape cuts to Spongebob's house in his room where his dead corpse was laying at.'''

So this turned into another A BUNCH OF SCARY THINGS HAPPENED FOR NO REASON story.

'''At this point, it was at the 9:01 mark when this loud sudden strange static sound played. Spongebob’s body stood up and turned to the viewer. His eyes were deep shade of yellow and red and his body had a slit mark that went from his leg all the way up to his right eye. One of his buck teeth was chipped. His skin was a pale yellow. Spongebob walks closer to the screen, his body becoming more detailed the closer he got. He stopped at the point where most of his highly detailed face was covering the screen. He laughed in a deep voice and loud Static followed.'''

I have no comment for this.

The taped ended when the screen went back to the vcr menu.

I hope you don't mean like a DVD menu, because apparently kids think that VHS tapes have them. I'm assuming you mean the blank, blue screen?

I put the tape in my safe I kept in my room, locked it, and put it in my closet.

Ok, so the adult Nickelodeon crew had to be hospitalized after seeing this, but some little kid watches it and doesn't feel anything. The fuck?

In one of the emails John sent me, he mentioned a guy named Jorges Pubenstein.

You can't expect me to take you seriously if you have a character whose last name has the word "pube" in it.

'''He apparently worked as an animator for the series and had his contact. He gave me his contact and told me “do whatever you want with it” I wanna see if he picks up and if so I want more information about this "series". So for now peace.'''

Unfortunately, the story goes on.

'''I finally got in contact with Jorges Pubenstein after fucking 3 times of calling him. All 3 of the calls led me to his voicemail which said "Hi, this is Jorges Pubenstein if you are looking for me then I am busy animating or something. So leave a message thank you." I left a message this is what it said. "Hi this is Aidan I was wondering if you can give me more information about Spongebob's Schizophrenia. I've seen the tape so please just contact me please, thank you."'''

This reminds me of the Day With SpongeBob SquarePants search.

'''An hour later he contacted me. At first he was crying for the first minute or two. Then he said this.'''

'''“Hi Aidan, this is Jorges I'm the animator for Spongebob's Schizophrenia. I want to tell you I did animate that and I was forced to. So this is what happened I was recently hired as an animator for Spongebob Squarepants and these 2 people told me that they were directors for a new Spongebob episode and they told me to follow them. They knocked me out and when I woke up I was strapped to a chair in a warehouse.'''

Not a smart plan. How are you supposed to make a cartoon if you're tied up?

Those 2 people told me to work on "Spongebob's Schizophrenia" They told me the story then they forced me to animate it.

How they "forced" him to will probably never be explained.

'''It was hell on earth. A few days later they let me go. It was on February 17, 2014 when they hijacked it on TV. I have seen the full episode and I couldn't go to sleep for a whole week."'''

Apparently Nickelodeon's animation studios and it's broadcasting center is the same building.

'''I asked him about the audio and how it was loud and weird at the 9 minute mark. He said this "The loud static contains screams and people getting murdered while there is static.'''

'''I said "Thank you and contact me when you can remember more information." Then I hung up. I will blog tomorrow or something bye.'''

Unsympathetic little prick!

'''Well today was a little interesting. I was looking up my blog and it has 145 followers. One of those followers is Andrew Schizo.'''

Really?

'''He is an animator and apparently he was one of the animators for the Spongebobs Schizophrenia series. He emailed me saying this. "Hi this is Andrew Schizo I am one of the animators for the spongebobs schizophrenia series. If you want to contact me here is my number *-***-****-***. Thanks."'''

You have no clue how phone numbers work, do you?

So I decided to give him a call and this is what he said.

"Hi Aidan, This is Andrew. The one who emailed you. I wanted to talk to you about that series. I was 23 a fresh new animator out of college.

>Finishes college at 23

>Doesn't need prior experience or anything.

Got ya!

'''I was thinking of studios to animate for. And the first thing that popped in my mind was Nickelodeon. So I contacted them to see if they we're hiring animators. Surprisingly they were hiring animators. So I got hired for nickelodeon. I was told by a Manager of the studio that I was gonna animate Spongebob Squarepants. I was so excited. On my First day I was sketching spongebob. The second day I was approached by Jill and Phillip.'''

'''They told me that they were managers for Spongebob Squarepants. They also told me to follow them to their office. I was gullible back then, so I followed them. When they stopped we were at a Abandoned Looking Office. As soon as I looked at the office everything went black. I woke up in a Warehouse with a guy named Jorges. They told me to “animate now” or they will kill me. So I did. There was more episodes we made. I have all of them but I will send them through a period of time.'''

If someone told me this, I'd assume they were lying.

'''I asked him if there was credits at the end of the first episode he said "Yes" and "I will send them in the mail maybe tomorrow." I hung up. That's all I needed to know.'''

Didn't even tell him "Bye! Love you!". Insensitive prick!

'''Today I received a package from Andrew. It was a box and inside the box was a DVD titled "Ending Credits" I immediately remembered the phone call yesterday and put the DVD in my DVD player and it cut to the credits of the previous episode. This is what it showed:'''

He puts the credits here. I'm not going to the effort of bolding them all. Tl;dr: most of them don't even sound like real names. Author wrote whatever words came to his mind.

'''I am still weirded out by the fact that Steven Hillenburg was in those credits. But I decided to give him a call.'''

Me: Hi

Steven: Hi

Me: Do you know Spongebob's Schizophrenia?

Steven: ......

Steven: that...

Steven: Fine

You don't separate silence, you fool! You separate when changing speakers.

'''Steven: So it was 2013 and I remembered that I hired 2 Junior Managers for my show. Well turns out that they were apparently "Black Market" Users. So one day I was called into my office by Jill and Phillip. They told me they needed me for a minute. Well it was WAY over a minute.'''

I ended up in a warehouse. They turned at me and said "Write Now." I looked down at the table and there was a Piece of paper and a pencil. They told me that they were gonna make a new "Series" called "Spongebobs Schizophrenia.”'''

Not if Viacom's legal team has anything to say about it! Also, why didn't anyone call the police on these stooges?

'''I wrote the “story” for them. A few days later I was called into my office again. It was Jill and Phillip but they had a VCR Player. They told me to sit down. So I did sit down. They put in a tape. Then they pressed played. What I saw was hell right in front of me.'''

Me: Yes I have seen that

'''Steven: Oh..... *Sobs*'''

'''Steven: I'm gonna go... My god.'''

Lame! Also, this story goes on forever, so I'm just going to do a few cuts to get this crap done faster.

'''He is shown walking with Patrick to the Krusty Krab. Spongebob then says "Patrick would you ever kill someone?" Patrick says "No"'''

LOL

'''Spongebob then proceeds to say "I have these voices in my head saying.... to kill people... I don't know why, but I don't want to kill I'm Spongebob Squarepants why would I kill I have been happy my whole entire life and this is what it had to come too isn't it a Sponge wanting to kill people? Then so be it for the love of fish I'm going nuts Patrick." Patrick says nothing. Then it cuts to the Krusty Krab and into the kitchen'''

I wouldn't say anything either. Anyway, he gets in contact with someone else, and we get this racist little gem:

'''They treated me like a Black Slave in 1800's. They whipped and... punched me. After it was over I quit nickelodeon studios and moved to a new location. Man it has been so long.”'''

'''Two things happened to me today. 1. I got another Spongebob episode and 2 I got a voicemail from an unknown person here is the dialogue of the recording.'''

'''Unknown: ................Well look who I found. Aidan. Well if you hadn't guessed it. It is Phillip that creator of Spongebob’s Schizophrenia. I swear if you post one more thing I WILL....'''

VOICEMAIL END

Well I know it is Phillip now.

LOL! Also, how did these assholes get this guy's personal info like his phone number?

'''I got another Spongebob Episode called "Treat." I think Andrew was punning me. I played the Episode on my VCR because the Episode was on a VHS cassette.'''

The episode starts out with the intro but there is more dialogue.

"Who are you gonna kill?"

"Tec!"

'''Then the intro ends and cuts to the title card. Then it cuts to Spongebob's living room where Gary and Spongebob and just sitting there doing absolutely nothing. Gary meows in hunger. Spongebob realizes that he needs to get food for Gary. So he rushes out the door and runs to a car. He throws the fish out of the car and drives off.'''

LOL! Grand Theft Auto, SpongeBob edition!

'''I found a website with info on the episodes. There was only 5. I have not viewed it yet but it. It apparently is called "Blood" The Description says this.'''

"SpongeBob goes to his house and finds b."

SpongeBob goes to his house and finds /b/?

I got another Episode from Andrew Today Titled "No, No more" I played the episode on my Betamax System.

'''It starts out with the usual intro then it shows bubbles then shows the Krusty Krab. It shows a fish ordering a regular Krabby Patty. Squidward says in an unusual voice "Congratulations you are the 1 Millionth customer here come and follow me for your prize!" It abruptly cuts to the kitchen where Spongebob is making some Krabby Patties. The Patties have a more Orange color than they usually do which is odd in my opinion'''

You know what, I'm going to stop here. Sorry everyone for yet another half-assed Nitpicks. This story was so repetitive and boring I couldn't get it all down. This story can be summed up like this:

>I got a call from this person

>I got a new tape

>Violent things happen on the tape

>Jill and Phillip are assholes! > : (

It's the same shit over and over again, like a merry-go-round. Thank you all for reading.

Version 1/Origin story
'''"ALEX!" I heard my mother yell,'''

Is she yelling at you because you're a protagonist in a Crappypasta?

'''"YEAH?!" I replied back,'''

I'm imagining them yelling like they hate each other.

"TIME FOR SCHOOL!!!!"

Public school, probably.

I got out of bed, got dressed then go to the bathroom to look in the mirror

Most people go to the bathroom to take a shit, MC goes to see himself.

seeing my fucked up, brown hair.

Better than what I'm seeing, which is a poorly written story.

I brushed my teeth and put some water in my hair

Take a real shower, you smelly cow.

doing my usual morning routine, I looked over to see that my mom is still in bed with Pat,

Great. Nothing starts a day like walking in on your mom the morning after she fornicated with a complete stranger. Seriously, is her door open or something? WTF?!

I checked the time to see that it was 7:54 AM.

Aren't most schools opened before then?

I then grab my computer and played some online games before school.

Then I was late and got expelled, so Mom and the guy she fucks sent me to boarding school. The end.

A couple of minutes later it was time to get on my bus,

The short one that follows the real school bus, probably.

I shut off the computer as I run out the house,

Ran out of the house.

being in the rush that I was

You forgot the word "of" in the last sentence.

I most likely forgot something at the house

Then maybe you should use your mornings to get ready for school, instead of playing your trashy online games.

'''but I couldn't quite figure out what it was.. Halfway across the street it hit me, I knew what I had forgotten.'''

Your common sense, if you have any.

'''"I forgot my phone...SHIT!" I thought to myself as I ran back to my house to get it real quick.'''

Yeah, like you need a phone for school.

I finally made it to the bus stop in time, with my phone and time to spare.

Nah nah nah nah. You were late and they expelled you.

I pull out my phone to check Instagram,

To see your e-thot sister's newest uploads probably.

I look at the chat named "Homo Rainbow Llamas"

Great. Homophobia.

I sigh as I see no new messages, "no messages since September.. great" I say to myself with an obvious sarcastic tone in my head.

"This is the worst October 1 ever!"

I then looked to see my texts with Ben,

Is Ben sexy? And if so plz share his nudes.

I look up from my phone a split second later to see that the bus arrived..

You didn't feel the bus stop, you realized it when you actually saw it stop. Something in your mind isn't working, champ.

I finally made it to school, walking to my classroom, looking at the ground and avoiding eye contact with everyone around me.

IM BULLIIIEEED!

I glance around to see dakota and Megan aren't here

Poor dakota, must be tough having a name that's spelled in all lower case. Maybe that's why she isn't there, maybe she is getting her name legally changed with proper capitalization.

"awesome...., just fucking awesome" I say to myself as I roll my eyes and grab out my binder

Is Megan your e-thot sister?

so I can do some artwork instead of doing actual school work.

No wonder you're so damn stupid, you don't try to learn anything at school! Christ, I know it's a public school, but there might be SOMETHING valuable. Also, how in the Hell are you getting away with it? Also, your drawings probably look like trash.

Right as everything is going well and I was almost done with my drawing, my phone goes off right in the middle of math class, I look around to see if anyone heard my phone, I got paranoid and thought I'd get written up but I guess they didn't hear anything,

That's not realistic at all!

'''I was lucky. I quickly looked to see who had texted me, it was my mom.'''

Is she so neglectful that she doesn't know you're supposed to be in fucking school?

"Once you get home, no electronics until you do your chores, and I'm taking you to work today"

OH NO! NO ELECTRONICS, WHAT A BITCH!

'''I sighed as I quietly and carefully typed back, "ok mom love you," and quickly put my phone back in my pocket. I was done with my drawing yet I still didn't feel up to doing my work.'''

Imagine this bozo trying to survive life after school. He'll have to work at one of those shitty fast food restaurants, and will end up getting fired for his laziness. Have fun on the streets, future hobo.

II stared out the window,

Who's II?

not even trying to do my work, it was way too hard.

It would be easier if you learned all the stuff that came before it.

I heard footsteps from next to me.

Is it the nice lady who follows you around all day that tries to calm you down and gives you "happy candies"?

"Alex, do your work"

Let's be more realistic and show the teacher getting pissed and abusive.

'''I look back at my teacher as immediately pretended to do my work. After 3 minutes of doing so, the bell rings for tech, my favourite class. I had always been talented in the field of internet hacking, website vandalism was always interesting to me.'''

Ooh! Big hacker, so cool! Are you that 4chan guy? In other words you go on FANDOM sites, vandalize them, then tell everyone you're a "hacker".

'''"YES!" I whispered as I go to leave the class. First period math sucks, I was super stoked for second period (my elective, technology). I ran up to a computer as I quickly logged on and start to hack into the school website to fuck with my school district for shits and giggles'''

Apparently Shittycharacter is so special that he is allowed to do anything.

even if I'm not allowed to do so, I still do it hoping no one will catch me, the school is too lazy to track down IP addresses,

And too lazy to tell you to do your fucking work!

plus I can just change it once they start investigating.

You probably don't know how a VPN works. Then again, you probably don't know how "hacking" works, you're just making shit up because you think it makes you look cool. News flash author: from everything you've told us so far about yourself, you're an asshole and whatever happens to you in this story is well deserved.

Twenty minutes later, I'm almost done I hear the bell ring

'''"JUST IN TIME!" I'''

The word "said", or more likely "shrieked" is missing.

'''I just sent all the information into my phone. I chuckled as I shut off the computer'''

Anyone else notice that main characters being assholes is another a common theme?

'''"what's so funny?" Mr. Earl asked,'''

"Knowing full well that I was doing something that made me look like a douchebag"

"Nothing, it's just I had fun in technology class" I say as I smile and walk off.

He's probably used to your random outbursts of laughter because of your "special needs".

Finally schools out I had to talk to the counsellor again but whatever I soon have therapy to go too.

HA HA HA HA! He's even admitting that he's mentally challenged and needs to see a (Supreme) counselor! Epic!

'''"Hey Alex what are you up to" I look behind me to see jorja "want to hang out?" She asks.'''

Either the author is too stupid to correctly spell Georgia, or the girl's parents were.

"Umm sure" I say

Forgetting that my mom wants to take me to work.

'''"Awesome at my house!" Jorja says as we walk to the bus.'''

You have Awesome at your house? That sounds so cool, I've never seen one before!

'''"one more day left until schools done, are you excited?" She asked, as she looked at me.'''

The spelling in this story is equally shitty to the plot.

'''"HELL YEAH, I HAVE A PLAN!" I exclaimed, thinking about the hacking that I was doing earlier,'''

Great. Confess to committing a cyber crime before you even do it, you dumb prick.

"What's the plan?"

"I'm going to report you to your handler."

"Oh you'll see" I laugh as jorja looks at me like I'm out of my mind.

That's because she knows you're "special needs". She's also probably wondering where your "Happy Nurse" is.

"Shit, I can't hang out I have to go to my mom's work sorry"

Mr. Hacker doesn't seem to have a very good memory.

'''I see jorja look at me madly "Oh yeah your just making an excuse to not come to my house!" she says as she gets up and moves to another seat'''

Why are you friends with her, she's a total bitch?

I finally get.home as I text Ben

"I LUV U, BENNY!" is probably what you sent.

we then call but I remembered I had to do my chores,

Your memory is as shitty as the story you're starring in.

unless I get in trouble I hung up on Ben,

I bet you did. I ain't talking about phones, either.

'''then got to work. I only had 20 minutes until my mom got back from work'''

I thought you were going to work with her? Did she use her break just to pick you up? WTF?!

'''I hear the door open "Hello?" "Hi mom" I said as I put the last plate away'''

Not only were you too lazy to start a new paragraph when changing speakers, but you were also too lazy to tell us you were doing dishes.

"You ready to go to work? I have something amazing to test on you," my mom says

WHAT?! Are you... are you going to use your son for some kind of testing? Just because he's a monkey, doesn't make him a lab animal! How in the Hell can you say that so calmly?!

"Sure let me grab my phone then I'll be rea-" I was cut off by my mom saying "No phones"

Why? Is she afraid you're going to "hack" into their server, or some shit? No, she's probably trying to tear you away from your bad habits of cellphone usage, and receiving naughty pictures of Ben.

I grab my phone anyway and shove it in my pocket

"I'm cool! I break all the rules!"

"Mom, it's an hour drive I'd have nothing to do" I say as I put my shoes on

Why do they live an hour away from her workplace? Also, I did you all a favor by putting this comment in, because the author didn't care to put dialogue paragraph spacing.

"Okay fine, get in the car" she says as I open the car door and sit down.

This right here is an example of how lazy the writing in this story is. We are never told that the MC and his mom went outside, they're just magically transported there apparently. Unless they have the car parked in their living room, I don't know. I guess anything is possible in this story.

I start texting Ben again, because he's normally free to talk to anytime.

Apparently Ben is the 30-something year old, unemployed bum you met on a dirty website you thought you were mature enough to be on despite the no-under-18 rule. Also, I'm assuming you're not sitting next to your mother, or she would see you disobeyed her rules regarding cellphones. Then again, it's very clear that she's a shitty mom because she raised a dumdum.

Fifty minutes later my phone died, so I just looked out the window and played music

I'm assuming you're playing music on the car radio. Not like you give enough of a damn to tell us how. You're concentrating on the scenery around you, so I guess the pills the "nice lady" gave you are starting to kick in.

"Alex I don't want you listening to this music," my mother says as she shuts it off

I don't feel sorry for you over her ballsbreaking you, because you're a little asshole.

"I need to go get gas," my mother added as she pulls up to a gas station

She probably should have told you that sooner, but ok.

'''and shuts off the car so she can put gas in. I start humming a song to myself, my mom sits down in the car and turns it on as she drives off.'''

Mom forgot she had to pay for the gas, so we were pulled over.

We're finally at the science lab as she puts me in a chair and connects me to wires

WHAT THE FUCK?! I mean, I know you need to be "tested", but I don't think wires were a way to determine... you know what, whatever. I doubt doing experiments on children are even legal, but I guess the mom assumes that since he has the IQ of a potato he isn't legally considered a human being.

I see my mom's partner jack turn on the machine "Are you ready Alex?"

Does your mom do experiments on you regularly? You're trying to make her out to be a bitch because NO ELECTRONICS!!!!!1!!!!, yet you don't give a fuck that she is experimenting on you!

Jack asks me, "Yep" I say

"I say casually as they do stuff that could fuck my body up real bad, and not in the way Ben said he was going to."

I see Jack put a needle in my arm and more wires,

It's like you don't even give a fuck. Let me guess, you're imagining you're some kind of Marvel hero and that the whole experiment-on-human-beings thing is natural.

I also see my mom go up to a silver and red button

Which one is it?

connected to a smaller machine and held it down.

That machine must suck. In most cases you can just press a button and it will start, you don't have to hold it down. Maybe it's sticky because you spilled juice and peanut butter on it. I don't know.

I started to feel shaky, I felt my adrenaline as a sharp pain went through my body going up and down, along with my vision getting blurry,I heard this ringing sound in both of my ears they then shut off the machine.

It was finally at this point MC realized that there is something wrong with this picture.

'''"Did you feel anything?" My mother asked'''

"No," I lied

"Really? Then why are you crying?" asked Mom. Seriously though, why did you lie? Are you that bad of a person that EVERYTHING you do has to be a negative action?

"Maybe we did something wrong" jack says as he puts 3 needles in my arm and rubs a silver yet cold cream on my face.

Ben said he wanted to shoot his cream on your face. Anyway, I like how he just gets stuck with needles and doesn't give a shit, like he can't feel it or something.

'''"Okay now!" Jack yells to my mom as my mom holds down the button but a silver one and a black one, I couldn't hear a thing or see a thing, I couldn't breathe,'''

Thank God. He's dead, and now the story can end!

I start coughing as they turn off the machine

Damn, he's alive!

and still felt the burning pain and I kept coughing out blood until I passed out.

Then the police break in and arrest your mother for child abuse. The End.

The last thing I seen was a blur of my mom running to me and a faint yelling.

She was probably excitedly shouting "YAY! THE BASTARD'S DEAD! DRINKS ARE ON ME TONIGHT, GUYS!". You blacked out before the party started.

I wake up in a hospital in the pitch black I get up

That made no sense, but ok. Also, how did you get to the hospital? Did your mom carry you and outright tell the receptionist that she was illegally using you for experiments? Sounds like your mom is just as stupid as you are.

I feel this rush of anger that I never felt before

Either he's pissed because of the shit his mom did to him, he's pissed because his "happy candies" are wearing off, or he's pissed because he's turning into the Hulk because he thinks he's a Marvel character.

as I get up and go to the bathroom to find a mirror

Here comes the "cool I-see-my-transformation-not-borrowed-from-Jeff-guyz" scene!

I see myself with really light blonde hair, one of my eyes was a light grey colour, the other was pitch black and had black liquid coming from my eyes..

You know who else has two eye colors? Chris Chan. Also, black liquid coming from eyes isn't cool. It was never cool. Don't know why people like that cliche.

'''I look at my lips and see there's dry blood coming from my mouth. I stay there in shock'''

Your slow reaction shows there is something wrong with you.

'''"who would want to be with me now? I'm a freak!" I say to myself'''

No one wanted to be with you in the first place because you were a complete asshole. Seriously, your looks don't sound that bad. A lot of ugly people find true love.

I think of jack "IT'S ALL HIS FAULT!"

Yeah, it's Jack's fault my mom did experiments on me! Seriously, what did he do? Did he tell you you couldn't hang out with Ben anymore?

I hear someone open the door to the hospital room that I was in, I hide in the darkness and close the bathroom door a little and I see the nurse look around the room and come in the bathroom

It would have been funnier if she walked in on you taking a pee. That would teach her a lesson for not knocking first!

'''she after closed the door but it was still pretty bright. I hear her call the doctor'''

TENSE SWAP!

"doctor she's gone" she said as she ran out the room.

SHE?! I thought the author was a guy for some reason! Holy fuck, LOL!

"They think I'm gone, so if I go back in bed they will see me like this I can't go back now"

I say aloud. I can't see them so they can't hear me.

I see the window

Here comes a "brilliant" idea:

and I smash it open seeing how high the jump was

Apparently, it wasn't a transparent window you could just see out of. Also, yeah, no, that won't attract attention: breaking glass. How and with what is never explained.

"if I jump I will die!"

The first sensible thing you said in this entire story.

'''I hear the door behind me. I see 2 nurses and a doctor I turn around but quickly turn back to the window "they can't see me like this I'm a monster!"'''

They probably already saw you. Not just when you were being admitted and treated, but like, also, right now.

I say to myself "don't jump, Alex you'll die" the boy says

What boy? Is the doctor a five year old?

"Your mom is waiting for you in the waiting room" the nurse says as I hear footsteps behind me.

tEnSe SwAp!

"you don't care about me just say I'm dead or something"

You're right. They don't care about you. Most people who enter the medical field don't actually give a fuck about their patients.

"we do care" a male voice said

Who said it?

"don't jump Alex" I turn around to face them I see the fear in their eyes "I'm a monster Leave me alone" the lights turn off as I jump out the window.

Why did the lights turn off? Did this whole negotiation scene take up the rest of the day and all the evening, and now it's dark? Oh well, one less shittycharacter in the world. Unfortunately for us though, there is an alternate "Origin" story.

Alternate Origin story
Heads up, everyone. This version manages to be even worse than the last because it follows the Jeff formula. Just thought I'd warn you all.

Alex rested his face into his hands as he pushed out his chair a bit.

I thought Alex was a girl because of the whole "she's gone" thing? Let me guess, Alex is a boy, but because you don't proof read your work, you spelled "she" by accident.

'''He felt a tap on his shoulder, He perked his head up. He turned around to see his teacher, she was whispering, telling him to wake up. He nodded and sat up straight.'''

The fact that Shittyteacher doesn't give a shit that her student isn't learning anything makes it obvious that this is a public school.

Alex wasn't even asleep, though he wasn't going to argue.

I would.

There were 15 minutes left of class, 15 being too many for him.

Don't worry, Alex. Your "concentration candies" will kick in soon.

He felt like he was going to pass out from exhaustion.

Probably because he wakes up early just to play fucking video games.

He'd barley gotten sleep last night due to bone chilling night terrors.

Was it the voices in his head that every OC has?

'''Alex sighed and picked up his pencil. His teacher tapped on his shoulder yet again.'''

BUSTED!

"Alex, come into the hallway for a moment,"

Take him out of view of the security cameras and hit him!

He nodded nervously, what if he was in trouble?

It would have been his own damn fault.

What if this was the teacher's last straw and he'll get kicked out of class?

See comment above.

His teacher had never liked him as a student, he always thought of Alex as a slacker in her class.

Maybe she doesn't like him because he is a slacker?

He followed her into the hallway as she says in a low tone voice,

"Listen, Alex. I know you're tired from last night, your mother emailed me what happened, she assumed you'd be falling asleep at your desk. I understand you're tired but can you try your very best to stay awake, please?"

Let's be realistic and have the teacher say "I DON'T GIVE A SHIT WHAT HAPPENED LAST NIGHT, DO YOUR FUCKING WORK!". Maybe I was right, maybe this is a special needs school where parents can call the staff and tell them about any special needs their little monkeys need.

'''He nodded. He was really tempted to tell her that he wasn't even asleep but, he didn't want to come off rude.'''

A normal person would be afraid of getting into trouble because, since he was awake, there was no excuse for him to slack off.

This was like the first time his 2nd period teacher has ever been understanding of his situation of continuous night terrors.

No, at this point she was just worn down and tired of his shit, so she just goes along with it.

'''The two of them walked back to class and he sat back at his desk. You see, his desk was at the back of the classroom'''

That's because they're not going to waste the seats in front on someone who isn't even going to try to learn something.

'''so he had a good chance of going on his phone and not getting caught. He slowly took his phone out of his pocket, once he saw that his teacher was at the front of the class, of course.'''

Plot twist: the battery died.

He texted his friend Max,

What about Ben, did the police catch up to him?

asking if it was just him or the whole entire biology lesson just wasn't making sense.

I take it Max is also a slacker who has his phone on in class? I told you it was a special needs class.

He put my phone down,

He put your phone down? If you're that close to him, why don't you ask him verbally?

He thought his ringer was off but vibration mode was still on.

Ringer and vibration mode are two different things. It's hard for me to understand what you are trying to say, when you put no effort into your spelling.

'''His luck. A few seconds later he got a response. His phone buzzed right in the middle of the teacher talking.'''

Kick both of them out of class! Make them wear the dunce cap and write on the chalkboard "I B DUMDUM" a billion times!

'''Well there goes all his progress that he made with his science teacher. Alex looked around the room to make it look like he was trying to figure out who's phone it was.'''

Unfortunately for him, the rest of the class was looking at him, making it obvious who the culprit was.

'''He accidentally locked eyes with his teacher. You could just see the imaginary smoke coming out of her ears, oh boy was she infuriated.'''

I would be too.

"ALEX BARBERIO! PRINCIPAL'S OFFICE, NOW."

More like "Barbarian" because of how uncivilized this little ass is.

This had to of been the first time he was ever sent to the principal's office in my life.

"This had to of been the first time he was ever sent to the principal's office in my life."

Author forgot this wasn't a story about him. Or, at least it wasn't supposed to be.

He spent the rest of the period in the principal's office.

Probably sleeping.

Now that all of the progress with his science teacher was destroyed, He felt guilty, and alone.

It's his own damn fault for jacking off!

He thought someone finally understood his situation.

And he blew it. Of course, since he's supposed to be our hero, we we're supposed to feel sorry for him.

'''The period was over, though it felt like an eternity in the principal's office for him. This pretty much ruined his whole day, he can't stand the feeling of being yelled at ; especially in the beginning of the day. The rest of the day was complete shit for him.'''

It totally sucks that he has to pay the consequences for his own bad behavior! :(

'''He stepped onto the bus and sat down in the front row. He was never invited to sit with the popular kids in the back.'''

Maybe because he's an asshole?

Kids would yell out to him and call him names.

Like "Mr. Big Hacker", and "Dude, I told you, I already have a boyfriend! Leave me the fuck alone!"

After being on the bus ride for a little less than a half hour, he got dropped off at his house.

So what, they live far away from his mom's work AND the school? Do they live on a fucking farm or something?

'''He would always enter the front door with his heart pounding. He never knew when Jack was going to be home.'''

Let me guess, Jack is the SUPR MEANIE STEPDADDY GUY? And let me take another guess: he isn't mean at all, you just think he's mean because he disciplines you.

'''He walked up the front steps of his house, entering. Alex noticed his step dad (Jack) came home early. He ran upstairs and locked the door, that was his usual routine.'''

Yep!

'''He curled up in a ball and turned on his phone. He heard Jack screaming at his mother.'''

"Here it comes..." I say as I roll my eyes.

'''He heard a loud bang. Alex jumped up. He went to go unlock the door and see what happened. His parents' arguments don't usually get physically bad, or physical at all. In this case, it seems bad. He walked down the stairs to see his mother holding her head, crying. She whispered, "A- Alex go get the phone, call 9-1-1.. please.." He immediately ran to the kitchen to grab the home phone. He bumped into Jack on his way in there.'''

I thought he had a cellphone upstairs, why didn't he use that? Oh yeah, that's right, because we need an abuse scene.

'''"Shit," he thought to himself. He shoved Alex away and slapped him. Jack walked down the hall. Alex picked up the phone and quickly dialed 9-1-1. His mother screaming. Alex was sobbing as he told the operator their location. The cops came in less than 5 minutes and held their guns up to Jack,'''

Bitch, do you even know how police operate? They're not going to just pull guns out on the guy for no reason. Unless he gave them a reason to, and you were too lazy to write about it.

'''Jack screamed, "IT'S NOT ME IT WAS FUCKIN LOUISE!" The cops ran over to the woman on the floor screaming, assuming it was Louise, Alex's mother.'''

Who the fuck's Louise? I'm just as confused as to who she is as these cartoonish police officers.

It was.

That made everything you just said pointless.

'''They began tackling her and cuffed her, not acknowledging the fact that she was injured. "STOP IT WASN'T HER! IT WAS HIM!" Alex exclaimed, pointing at Jack.'''

'''"It's favouritism, officer. Please help me!" Jack pleaded. "She injured me, she slammed me into the wall!" Jack continued to make up a sob story of lies. Alex was on the floor crying. They seemed to be believing Jack. His mother would never get physical.'''

TOTALLY NOT INSPIRED BY THAT SCENE IN JEFF WHERE LIU GETS ARRESTED, GUIZE!

Also, there's a fuck ton of things wrong with this. First off, why would they arrest someone who is visibly injured, and not someone who isn't? Second, why aren't they taking anyone else's side of the story? Third, why are they listening to Jack? Fourth, it's more likely they would suspect Jack because he's a man.

'''They cuffed her up and drove off with her. Alex was screaming at this point. "WHY?! WHY WOULD YOU LIE! WHAT DID SHE DO TO YOU?!! SHE DOESN'T DESERVE THIS, GOD DAMN IT!"'''

WHY?! WHY WOULD YOU WRITE A BAD STORY! WHAT DID WE DO TO YOU?! WE DON'T DESERVE THIS, GOD DAMN IT!

'''Jack grabbed Alex by the collar. "You better shut the hell up. This is my house now, and you listen to me!" Alex coughed up a bit of blood and ran to his room. He cried for hours. He eventually fell asleep.'''

How about trying to run away? Wouldn't that be better?

'''The sound of his alarm clock. That damn piercing noise, it made him jump up and wish he wasn't alive. Every. Single. Morning. He went downstairs to say good morning to his mother and remembered. He sighed. He ate breakfast in silence, Jack was already at work. He got to school. It was miserable as always. The day went by so slow, well, slower than usual.'''

Not as slow as this Jeff knock off.

He finally got home.

"Alex!"

The voice came out of no where,

Is this going to be another abuse establishment scene, or is this the MURDER ABUSIVE PARENT scene?

'''Alex jumped in shock. He didn't realise Jack got home early, again.'''

'''"What!?" Alex yelled back,'''

"Get in the car, you are heading to work with me."

Let me guess, the author decided to create an abusive stepfather to do experiments on Alex, because it makes no sense that his seemingly loving mother would do so.

"Huh? Why? You never take me to work with you,"

Alex didn't even know what Jack's job was, let alone where he worked.

How in the fuck...?

He got in the car and waited for his dad.

I thought he was his step dad.

'''He put his seat belt on and took out his phone to go talk to some of his friends. He heard the car door close as his dad sat in the front seat. It seemed like they were driving for hours. They finally reached a building. It looked abandoned almost. He definitely didn't get good vibes from it. Jack got out of the car. Alex stayed.'''

"Come on, get out of the car now!"

Is this the creepy old shed you're going to kill him in? That seems pointless if the police think you're so innocent. Just kill him at home, save money on gasoline.

'''Alex sighed and got out of the car. He followed Jack into the building.'''

"Where are we going?"

"Shut your damn mouth and just followed me.

LOL!

They walked down staircase after staircase.

"What the fuck are we even doing here? Do you even work here?"

'''"Watch your language!" Jack yelled, slapping Alex.'''

CARTOONISH ABUSE, GUYZ!

There was a bed, it looked like a hospital bed.

'''"What do you even do here..?" Alex asked,'''

'''"Can you shut up and lie in the damn bed!" Jack exclaimed.'''

Let me guess, he rapes him because RAEP IS SCURY AN NOT OBFENSIVE AT ALL, GUYZ!

'''Alex nervously lied down onto the bed. It felt cold. He felt like something wasn't adding up. Jack left the room for a moment. Alex was sweating, yet he was freezing. He had no idea what was going on. Jack wheeled in a large table with a bunch of tools in it.'''

SOOO SCURY!

'''"What the fuck.." Alex thought to himself.'''

I've been thinking the same thing since the beginning of this story.

'''Jack took out something that had looked like a Intravenous (IV) from off the table and set it up next to Alex. [...] He pushed the needle into Alex's forearm. The needle was connected to a pouch of some..unknown liquid, it looked..neon green.'''

IT'S URANIUM!

'''"You aren't a registered doctor Jack don't do this.." Alex begged in a faint voice.'''

How do you know? You don't know what his job is!

'''Jack took Alex's other arm and strapped on some kind of electroshock device. [...] His skin was slowly turning pale to an extent where he looked grey and sick. He passed out. Jack picked up a syringe off the table. It was filled with thick black liquid. He walked to the other side of the bed and injected it into Alex's eye.'''

I hate this story because it sucks so bad that I don't even have any comments for what's going on. It just sucks.

His eye slowly turned pitch black.

'''"Now let's see if this worked." Jack said to himself.'''

This story is too dialogue heavy. Just sayin'.

'''He pressed the button on the electroshock device. His whole body lit up for a split second.'''

Jack's or Alex's?

'''Jack heard the loudest piercing scream he's ever heard. Alex stood up and ripped out the IV.'''

HULK IS MAD!

"WHAT THE FUCK IS WRONG WITH YOU!"

What the fuck is wrong with you?

'''He ran out of the building. He ran so damn far.'''

LOL

He put up his hood

HOODIES R COOL OC CLOTHES, U GUIZE!

'''and went into the thrift store. He shoplifted a pair of sunglasses and hair bleach then left the store.'''

If Jack wasn't chasing him, then the police would be. Seriously, who the fuck steals from a thrift store. Also, what thrift store sells hair bleach?

'''He used the rain water to do his hair and bleach it in the middle of the woods. He couldn't have people recognise him.'''

Why, because he stole from a store?

'''He walked for miles until he found a few buildings. He climbed to the top of a 6 story building.'''

I thought he was supposed to be the Hulk, not Spider Man!

'''When he reached the top he closed his eyes. He had a flashback of the screaming. The sound of police sirens echoed in his head. He started to cry and leaped to his death.'''

Why didn't he just kill himself? Why did he have to change his appearance, and all that other shit?

'''People have been experiencing a virus in their computer that caused them to have weird files and pop ups of a boy of his description. Nothing has been investigated professionally.'''

First off, since he isn't a "hacker" (read Wiki vandal) like in the original, that is completely unrelated. Second, how do you know someone didn't take a photo of him and put it in the virus, like one of those OHMYGOSH-HERE-IS-A-CREEPY-PHOTO-OF-A-SUICIDE-VICTIME edgelord shits? Third, is it a photo, or is he like some sort of Bonzi Buddy?

Version 2/Sequel
My name is Addilyn,

Your name sucks.

on my 16th birthday, my mother bought me a new phone, iPhone 4th generation to be exact.

I don't give a fuck!

'''My friends Kira, Ashley, Dinah, and, Chloe had a sleepover at my house on October 24th. We were all home alone,'''

That's very irresponsible of your parents, but ok.

watching movies and putting makeup on ourselves just like any 7th grade girl slumber party until someone interesting happened.

"Interesting".

'''When it was around midnight. My lights were flickering quite a bit, that wasn’t that strange but when I started to get suspicious messages from an unknown sender on my phone'''

Let me guess, SOMEONE WAS BREATHING IN THE PHONE, or SOMEONE THREATENED TO KILL ME, or gLiTcH!!!1!!!!

'''that’s when I began to get skeptical, it wouldn't let me check the email or phone number. I then got a call from a number that was also happened to be blocked. I decided to answer it'''

YOU STUPID CUNT!

thinking that it's some stupid little middle schooler lowlife pranking me but ...Oh boy it wasn't.

You're responding to an unknown caller. You're the "stupid little middle schooler lowlife".

I opened up my laptop to see if someone has been on messaging my email too, my friends crowded around me, each one of them were biting their nails in fear.

Why? It was an unknown number, not a murder threat! Bunch of pussies!

I tried to calm them down, trying to tell them it was probably some douchebag student from our school.

Without us actually knowing what your classmates are like, you sound like a total bitch. Ngl.

'''Mid sentence of trying to make them feel better, my laptop started acting up. All our tabs were xed out, after that, a message popped up saying something along the lines of “Are you scared?”'''

OOOH! SOOOOO SPOOPY!

'''We try to fix it. The “hacker” that was on my laptop just wouldn’t leave us alone!'''

Just shut the fucking thing off! Also, it's your fault for not having antivirus software.

'''This had been going on for a while now, it was now around 3 O'clock in the morning. We got ready to to sleep,'''

You're missing the word "go" there, buddy. Try proof reading.

'''grabbing our sleeping bags, hoping our devices would be okay when we woke up. We got settled on the floor, underneath our blankets, I looked up to notice my laptop was still on, it normally shuts off by itself,'''

By that you mean you let the battery run out, probably.

'''I shrugged it off as my friend Dinah it off and grabbed my T.V remote. We figured watching a movie would take our mid of this so called ‘chaos’. We watched a Pixar movie'''

Pixar movies are probably the most edgy thing your parents allow you to watch because you're clearly 12 or something.

'''and we ended up falling asleep afterwards. About halfway through the rest of the ‘night’, my laptop made a strange noise that only a lunatic would ignore,'''

Care to explain to us what it sounded like? No, you don't.

'''as I woke up, I saw my friends just getting up as well, we all run over and turn to my laptop. We looked at each other nervously. I put my laptop on the table, trying to see what's up with it. A little warning popped up, saying "You can’t get rid of me!"'''

I would laugh my ass off at that.

'''My friends and I looked at each other, we turned back to the laptop. I start to see sparks come from my laptop, I start to panic, thinking it’s going to explode or something but then, I saw two hands come out and grab the table.'''

YOU CAN'T BE SERIOUS! Is this a Trollpasta or some shit?

My fucking heart skipped a beat, I see this little boy around 13/14 years old his left eye is completely black with black blood or black something coming out of his left eye, what the fuck??' His right eye was a light grey almost white and orange sweatshirt and a black beanie .

Beanies are even more ridiculous than hoodies.

The body was nearly halfway out of my laptop, what kind of fucking drugs was I on…

Must have been something strong for you to write this shit.

'''I turned to my friends to see if I was seeing clearly, their faces were frozen and one of them almost passed out cold. The boy smiled at us, "YOU'RE ONLY A LITTLE KID YOU DON'T SCARE US!" Kira yells at the boy, as Ashley and Kira high five.'''

Yeah, high five! That was such a great comeback! You are the insult champion! Dumb bitches.

I looked at them as if they were crazy for standing up for themselves to that..to that, dumb virus of a boy!

Why don't you kill him?

“I'm your worst nightmare," the boy said, chuckling under his breath.

"Yes, you are. My worst nightmare is the protagonist of a bad story cartoonishly jumping out of my computer" I say sarcastically.

'''"You leave them alone!" Chloe said, as I see the boy look over to Chloe. His smile disappears "I think it’s your turn to play MY game now" they boy says, chuckling a bit louder. My friends and I were scared to death, we were all trembling at this point. What game does he want us to play..'''

Let's play "read a new story", because this one fucking sucks.

'''"Were not playing your game!" I say as the boy looks at me, clearly pissed off. I can’t believe I just said that, I had no idea what he was capable of..'''

Clearly nothing, because he's apparently just standing there doing nothing.

'''"THEN GAME OVER!" the boy says, with his voice glitching, after that sentence I straight up passed out..'''

Lamest fucking catchphrase ever! "GO TO SLEEP" sounds cooler than that shit.

I woke up in my sleeping bag with my friends still sleeping i wake then up to feel a burning feeling in my side as they wake up and go to the wash room.

To take a shit, probably. lol

We all had this..weird symbol on our arms..

A better author would have told us what these symbols were. I'm guessing they're pentagrams because of how cliche those are. Then again, a better author would write a better story.

'''I decided to upload the signal online. here's the image.'''

As far as I know the image has since been lost, but I'm assuming it's a pentagram. The author probably drew one on his arm, and took a photo where his face was visible. That's another thing I notice about Shitpastas, a lot of the time when they have images, they have something that's easily whipped up in a few seconds, and usually of something that offers no proof of anything that happened in the story.

we all thought it was a dream,

We all thought it was a dream that we all somehow had. Also, if the villain was threatening he would have killed someone. Did he just fall asleep with them, or some shit? Also, how would it be just a dream if you have that shit on your arms?

we were all hoping it to be a dream but we know it wasn't, after that day; My dreams and even my life have never been the same.

Did you stop being a bitch to your classmates? On a final note, I suggest everyone checks out this story's page because it has a hilarious meltdown from the author, claiming they copyrighted the story. Not joking, either.