Hani the redness

It was a loud day in the school. Vehicle sound from the freeways are distracting students and teachers. Miss Wati the nature science teacher were teaching students about a sound. Miss Wati raising her hand and pointing to rigth of freeways road. The freeways road look like a very crowded market with a noise that so noisy making the student cover their ear with a soft cotton.

Miss Wati look upset like she can’t find someone to help her.

So she turn on radio playing mozart music and raising her hand to the ear to give a sign that student to remove their cotton from the ear. While the student removed their cotton miss Wati feel excited and jumped making the floor shaking.

“That sounds of the vehicles making me sick!” Said miss Wati while rubbing her forehead. She decided to give homework to her students. Ira one of her students throw a paper plane that hit Hani nape. Ira laughing while Hani rubbing her nape and feel sad.

Hani bastri was super blunt bobs hair that have red pupils in her eye.

Hani was bullied by Ira mahar, Miranda Alya and Rana Andini the trio girl because her pupils.

Hani went to school gate with Adit Marito the wavy bangs hair boy with black pupils. Adit were Hani’s boyfriend that so handsome. Hani and Adit waiting for a public transportation number 13. Their school are in center of jakarta and their village were in north jakarta so they would have long ride with Adit in public transportation.

While waiting, Hani seeing Ira’s expensive car that stopped next to them. Ira open car window and mocking Hani with a word “village kids!”. Adit was so angry and yell at ira “if you said that word again i will punch you!”.

but Hani stopped Adit. She just didnt want they fighting each other.

After few minutes, they arrived at their village. Hani and Adit walk at they village that near the beach. After arrived Hani’s home, Adit decided to play at Hani’s house.

Hani’s mom, Mrs. Sari welcomes them at home and prepared some snacks for them. After change clothes, they decided playing hopscotch. when they started playing Hopscotch, Hani first to play the hopscotch. She throws the rock to the rectangle pattern in number 7 and jump. suddenly a rock from left hitting Hani knee and she fall making a blood falling from her knee.

Adit shocked to see Hani fall because a rock that fast hitting Hani knee.

Hani screams saying “who throws the rock into me!”she said with pain in her knee. A girl run to Hani with a sharp wood with smooth black hair with brown pupils scratching Hani’s back, torn the white t-shirt and make Scratch marks.

Hani were bleeding from the scratch marks making the white t-shirt is almost red. Hani’s mom mrs. Sari looked from the window and saw Hani with blood in the back and saw Ira took a sharp wood. she looked that shocked and run open the door and approaching the 3 kids. she took the sharp wood that ira brought and smash it with a big rock until it shattered into small piece.

She screamed to Ira saying “you almost kill my only daughter!” she said with a tears in her eye. she hugs Hani and said “go and stop bullied my daughter!”.

After Mrs Sari screamed at Ira, Ira ran to her house and crying.

After Ira ran Mrs Sari lift Hani to the house and and put Hani in bathtub. Mrs. Sari called her husband mr. Abu “hello honey, Hani’s hurt someone hurting her and she dying rigth now!” she said with crying. Mr. Abu answer it with angry feelings “who made my daughter like this?”she said with panic.

“Ira, she scratches Hani back with sharp wood!”She said.

“Ira again?!she was bad very bad!”he said when hearing the bad news about her daughter, he shocked like his heart stop and fell down and hit his head to the table.Mr Abu stop the call and hit her head into the table that make blood fall from head.

She need few minutes to think why her husband stop her call but she ignored it.

Mrs Sari shocked when she heard Hani suddenly scream so loud and Hani jump while lay down make her tail bone broke making her screaming very loud even the many neighborhoods heard the scream even Adit hear Hani scream.Miss Sari touch Hani face with two hand try to calm down Hani with a word “it’s okay its okay shh keep calm down i don’t want every neighborhood feel disturbed rigth now i know it’s painful but you have to calm down shh”said miss Sari while she stroking Hani face.

Miss Sari suddenly heard the door bell thinking a neighborhood angry because Of her daughter scream and the neighborhood want to scold Miss Sari.

She feel the goosebump when she open the door so she open door and say sorry.but when she open her eye she look Ira,Miranda and Rana take a long sickle and smiling very wide.miss Sari almost falling down and she know what happen next.she think that the three girl want to kill Miss Sari and Hani.

Ira lifting her Hand and stabbing Miss Sari chest and say “hey girl let’s stabbed Miss Sari twice!” She said with her wide smile.miss Sari are dying and she look the girl lifting the long sickle and stabbing Miss Sari chest four time until miss Sari death.Hani suddenly heard a very scary laugh and don’t know is the trio girl want to kill her.

Suddenly the bathroom door was open and Hani see the trio girl with bloody clothes and take long sickle smile at her.she try to scream to call a help from her mother.trio girl say to Hani with a small voice saying “sleep tight darling”and lifting the sickle.The trio girl stabbing every Hani body and Hani scream very loud but the trio ignored it.they stabbing Hani without mercy and making the blood fill the bathtube drowning Hani with blood making Hani die.

They falling one The long sickle the longest one to the bathtube.

They escaped from the Hani house to their home and giggled like a psycho.

The next day in the school the teacher say a bad news “Hani die alongside with her mother,police found Hani death body the bathtube fill with blood while her mother die in the house door.

Everyone crying and say “sorry Hani we can’t help you we feel so sorry to you!”.

The trio girl try pretend to cry but in their heart they feel happy because Hani was gone.in the school day they feel very happy laughing without giving a reason why they suddenly laughing.after the school day the ran to the car.

They feel the Happy feeling ever because they kill Hani.

While in the home suddenly a creature that was the soul of Hani come from Hani death body.The soul feel angry because the trio and she want they gone.

Her skin was red because of blood and her hair was red and her clothes and her pants was red.she look inside the mirror and see her red body.

She laugh like a psychopath and say “my new body is so pretty!”she said with psychopathic smile.she take the red sickle that she found in the bathtube and use it as her tool to kill the trio girl.

She ran and laugh now Hani was gone and righ now she is Hani the redness.

She open the Ira house and and see the luxurious home with a 5 floor.

She never get distracted with the luxury but she want to kill Ira.

She discover Ira was alone,Ira mother are doing yoga and Ira father still working in the office.she see Ira taking a bath in the left bathroom that has a door cover with little diamond.she open the diamond door and found Ira sleep in bathtube.Hani suprised Ira with her loud laugh and when Ira wake up she shocked about the red figure standing that turns out was Hani.

Ira bulging her eye to Hani and said “Hani?!i think you supposed to be dead?”.

Hani answer it with laugh “hahahaha!you think I’m a zombie?don’t afraid,I’m not a undead I’m a ghost!i’m was your true fear,that is Hani is your true fear!

When you see me you scream!your friend is are the same as you!

You kill my mom and me that is hurt you know?!”

Hani lifting the Long sickle and said “let’s taking a bath with a bathtube fill with blood!”.she stabbing Ira chest,stomach and the face making blood fill the bathtube.the blood was make Ira skin and hair was red same as Hani.

Ira scream saying “stop!I’m so sorry because a kill you but don’t kill me ahhhh!”.Ira die and Hani feel fun she said “good night sweetheart,good night sweethearts.”with psychopatic smile.

The next day Miss Wati say a bad news “Ira die in bathroom,she found dead with a stabbed marks and her skin was red!”miss Wati said with shock face.

Suddenly Miss Wati very shocked when see a photo from the bathroom cctv.

She said “Not just Ira that dead drowning with blood but Miranda and Rana are dead too drowning with blood and i had the photo that show how they die!”.

Miss Wati reveals the photo.the photos show a red figure lifting a long sickle to three girl.”it must be a killer that kill her victim in bathroom?”.she said with shocked face.”wait is that killer was Hani that that in bathroom?”said Adit the Hani boyfriend.”yes is that Hani!said Miss Wati.

Suddenly a knock voice came from the door the student think it was the other teacher needs help from Miss Wati.when Miss Wati open the door suddenly they scream to see a red skin girl that take a long sickle that smile to Miss wati and the student and said “hello everyone my mame is Hani the redness!”.



Credited to Fathiriva